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Child to Moon, Come In
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Out on the roof gazing at the moon again. . .hope you don't mind too much. . .


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         Child to Moon, Come In          
            
Pretty is as pretty does.  Every time
I let it spill that the woman in the moon
cast her silver-gold spell on me,
here it comes.  How stupid can I be?
Don’t I know her smile is a come-on?
She is cold.   She is distant.  A pale
milk-toast who ducks behind clouds
unexcused.  Not stupid, I wait for Owl’s
yooo-hooo, then inch up the window
by my bed, cre-e-e-e-p onto the roof,
and  bend my favorite spell-caster’s ear.
You listen, I mouth.   I know you
know, but. . .you listen.   Always home,
just have to close my eyes, and here
you are.  When I’ve said my piece, you
beam a big I Hear You.   Secrets always
safe.  Tell me something, Miz Moon.
Why is it you let those clouds walk  
all over you?   That’s not it, she sighs.
They work with me.  I help them lighten
up a little;  they keep me from seeing
too much.  You need to let me listen,
I say.  Not all ears, but take a gander.
Look like an elephant’s, or not?  
We still laugh about it.  L i s t e n.
 

      (c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007
 

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 Reviews of "Child to Moon, Come In"
Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on August 17, 2007
Enjoyed your creativity of thought.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
You are just like me....taken in by that lady...specially at certain times of the month.....lol!!

Getting old now ...missing out mostly!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Katherine Tracy (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Again, lots of neat images! Love ya Pea! Kat

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
I like both versions. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
cute little thoughts tonight. Lady J

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
i think this is a cool wite-someone to listen-priceless

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
I am a listener Phyllis, and |I must say I have never taken the time to chat with the moon. Interresting write, thank you for sharing.


Rose

Reviewed on July 27, 2007
What a wonderful conversation,and how fortunate am I to just listen. Beautiful whimsical write. PLB&G for caring and sharing. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
Lovely fantasy conversation with the moon. You open a new vista. Victor


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