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Makin' Waves {haiku-?}
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Poem Artwork

poets gather to surf


waving and comparing boards


until another wave steeps


 


 


(c) Phyllis Jean Green, August, 2007


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 Reviews of "Makin' Waves {haiku-?}"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Yes. One can't pause for too long before the next wave overcomes you. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
“Drowning”







Her stress level is higher



Than a 12 meter oceanic wave



The inner pain that cannot bridge



The turmoil of her life



The tube surrounding her


Comes crashing down on her



Within the tunnel of darkness



Emotionally drowning


In constant sorrows



Once the delight of a Surfer



The pillars she depended on



No longer secure in standing



Upon surfboard of insecurity







Copyright © 2007 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on August 17, 2007
A symbolic commentary on our segment of society in twelve short words. The absence of a tube-shooter reflects our daring comes not by power of body but by power of word.

And insightful message with dynamic image. What a pairing!

Richard

Reviewed on August 16, 2007
(((Pea))),

We gather together, ride the wave of words, and look forward to the next (even bigger) wave! I love this one, I love all your words. I love you, most of all. Let's ride! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Very nice.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Wow, what a great haiku...isn't it great to share, learn, and enjoy with fellow poets...enjoyed this my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
And so they continue to gather with each wave and excitement. Thank you for sharing.

Rose

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Excitement builds as we look for a new page to write. Great poem.

George

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Yes as members of the den that is a beautiful methaphor to describe the togetherness of our fellow authours and poets. Very nice...I like it a lot.

Fee

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
Hang 10-Jumped-on-the-bandwagon-on-land-to-preach-a-fad-that-died-out-in-the-sixties-hea-that's-heavy-man...waxin'-mama-drownin'-soon-rather-hear-Frankie-Avalon-sing-to-Annette-Funicello-waxin'-heavy-again-man-James-Darrin-Moon-Doggie-Son-Uva-Beach-Blank-Blank-Blanket-Bingo-Potato-Bug-Beatnik-tie-die-Hawaii-Five-O-Ventures-WIPEOUT!-Book-'em-Danno!

Your gliterati Hollywood Doll with silver wingtips on her lavender boots

Love ya so much,
Sage

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
Loved the haiku

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
Interesting, yet the waves keep getting larger and larger.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
love it!!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
yeah...your making waves alright...Smiles!

I feel like a cuppa tea now...almost to the bottom, and I'm being sloshed to and fro...awaiting the leaves to be read...

Oh wow! There goes PEA on a surfboard...LOL!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~


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