Imagine how it feels after walking barefoot for miles on concrete set on fire by a singeing sun. Blisters glisten, ready to pop, on six of your toes, but at last, you come upon a stream. Test it with a toe, and find it cool.
Imagine how it feels to try to fall asleep in a too-close room. It is summer. No fan, no air. Stuffy doesn’t begin to describe.. Turning your pillow, you find it cool.
Imagine how it feels to have the first drop of rain after a drought spanning months cool a spot above your brow, or to hear that a loved one who has been deathly ill is coming around, or to spoon with a lover after eons of empty, or discover you are right after someone unkind branded you the worst kind of fool..
Imagine how it feels after suffering agonizing pain to breeze through an entire day with scarcely a twinge. Now imagine your Muse gives you the gift of creating a poem that fits like your skin. Then it gets read. People take care to let you know the poem also fits them. All feel what you feel, now and then. ‘s to die for, this kind of cool. ..
Wow really refreshing and cool
Your words painted a stunning picture here
I could see in my mind dipping your toe
in the cool stream.
Absolutely cool and refreshing thoughts!!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
THIS is the kind of cool I'm talkin' 'bout!!!!!!!!! Awesome refreshment in beautiful verse: my new favorite of yours (you have a habit of doin' that, ya know? Good on ya!). BRAVA!
Freeze-frame capture of cool, cottony hydro-poetics! The senses come alive and nipples shoot through wet T-shirt - might as well take it off - dip the nuggets - panning for gold - filling the vial with flecks of color! Cool Cloth on Aching Brow soothes mind, body, and soul...Pea, this floats. Your poetry here is a special reminder of how we anoint our memories with the good thoughts...Love you. Say hi to Ray...how's that Taylor baby?
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Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Your words painted a stunning picture here
I could see in my mind dipping your toe
in the cool stream.
Absolutely cool and refreshing thoughts!!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
Love,
ET
Be safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Your poem is such a breath of fresh air. Blessings Always, Paul.
THIS is the kind of cool I'm talkin' 'bout!!!!!!!!! Awesome refreshment in beautiful verse: my new favorite of yours (you have a habit of doin' that, ya know? Good on ya!). BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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