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Cool Cloth on Aching Brow
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Cool Cloth On Aching Brow
 
Imagine how it feels
after walking barefoot for miles
on concrete set on fire
by a singeing sun.
Blisters glisten, ready to pop,
on six of your toes, but at last,
you come upon a stream.
Test it with a toe,
and find it cool.
 
Imagine how it feels
to try to fall asleep
in a too-close room.
It is summer.  No fan,
no air.  Stuffy
doesn’t begin to describe..
Turning your pillow,
you find it cool.
 
Imagine how it feels
to have the first drop of rain
after a drought spanning months
cool a spot above your brow,
or to hear that a loved one
who has been deathly ill
is coming around,
or to spoon with a lover
after eons of empty,
or discover you are right
after someone unkind
branded you the worst kind
of fool..
 
Imagine how it feels
after suffering agonizing pain
to breeze through an entire day
with scarcely a twinge.
Now imagine your Muse
gives you the gift of creating
a poem that fits
like your skin.  Then it gets
read.  People take care
to let you know
the poem also fits them.
All feel what you feel,
now and then.  
‘s to die for, this
kind of cool.
..

(c) Phyllis Jean Green, 2007

 

 


 
 
 
 
 

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 Reviews of "Cool Cloth on Aching Brow"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Oohh, I really love this one. Yes, it fits like a glove and inspires my own muse. Bless you. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Wow really refreshing and cool
Your words painted a stunning picture here
I could see in my mind dipping your toe
in the cool stream.
Absolutely cool and refreshing thoughts!!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
You get into the head and heart with this one Pea! Fine work!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Dawn Mullan
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
Nice word and image connections. Poetry fits us all, coolly. Thank you, DL Mullan

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
this poem definitely stimulates the synapses ...

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
Lovely! Really is a Cool Cloth - great read, thank you :o)Nicky xx

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Wonderfully inspirational and you really have hit home with this one...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Very nice writing,enjoyed...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Second verse did it for me . . . I relate . . . Been there, done that, when nobody had air conditioning . . . Nicely done!!!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
yes it is to die for this is a wonderful poem to which i can certainly relate-thank you

Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Tranquility reigns in that pen of yours, Pea; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Pea,

Your poem is such a breath of fresh air. Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed on October 9, 2007
(((Pea)))

THIS is the kind of cool I'm talkin' 'bout!!!!!!!!! Awesome refreshment in beautiful verse: my new favorite of yours (you have a habit of doin' that, ya know? Good on ya!). BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 9, 2007
Freeze-frame capture of cool, cottony hydro-poetics! The senses come alive and nipples shoot through wet T-shirt - might as well take it off - dip the nuggets - panning for gold - filling the vial with flecks of color! Cool Cloth on Aching Brow soothes mind, body, and soul...Pea, this floats. Your poetry here is a special reminder of how we anoint our memories with the good thoughts...Love you. Say hi to Ray...how's that Taylor baby?

Sage, your gliterati gay Hollywood doll with silver wingtips on her lavender boots and rhinestones bedazzled!


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