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Hate to Ask
by Phyllis Jean Green → (All Poetry by Phyllis Jean Green)
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May I borrow your heart
for an hour or so?
Mine didn't break.
Just hurts.
Can't find the words
to describe.
Love wends to loss,
I realize.
Doesn't keep you

from crying out
your eyes.
 
Just  an hour,
maybe the night


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 Reviews of "Hate to Ask"
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
Anytime, my heart is up for grabs my friend!
Handle with TLC is all I ask! :)
Stay Positive!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner PEACE, Warrior Purple Gypsy Passion Sheexooo
P.S. I feel like this a Phyllis Jean Green Fix kinda' night! I need another... Go ahead and smile, that's my way to your heart! ( I hope )

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 2, 2008
You may have my heart for as long as you need, sweet lady. Beautiful write. sorry about the heartache. Liz

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
it is said you have to clear away the old to make way for the new...crying works wonders

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
My heart, my shoulder, my ear,,, YES any time! Christine

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
As the others have said you may borrow my heart anytime, one thing I've learned about poets is that for the most part they are filled with compassion, heart, soul, and love for their fellow man...in this case for their fellow poet and friend! A touching write my friend...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
Always

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
You most certainly can borrow my heart, it is big enough to share. A great write Phyllis that you share with us. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
awe--sure you can!-well expressed sentiments in your write

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
Hi Pea:

You can borrow my heart any time. A well expressed piece!!!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
Beautifully emotional piece that grabs at any heart. Many hugs to you to warm and heal your sad heart....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on May 30, 2008
You lose someone too?? I am so sorry!! Know you are in my thoughts and prayers this evening; and always. We are hurting too: but you can borrow our hearts just as long as you need them--if you don't mind a few leaky spots, like Karla said.

Very well penned heartbreak!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed on May 30, 2008
(((Pea)))

You, too? I was kind of hoping to borrow yours ..... you see, my Daddy died two days ago - still in shock - couldn't afford to go to the funeral (which is tomorrow, in Ohio) - all I could do is send a dang sympathy card!! No, I'm not asking for anything - it just h u r t s so danged bad - painful, this, hits too close to home - you can have mine, it's a little leaky, though - can you patch it up?

(((((HUGS))))) love and prayer, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
Heart wrenching write. Sad but beautiful, if I had a good heart I'd gladly let you use it. Love and hugs my friend. Love, Bonnie


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