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Slough Gives Way to Casper the Ghost
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"Slough of despair."
We should make it a Halloween exhibit.
Watch people who have never been for real
mime shrinking back, shivering and rolling
eyes that peer through masks they put on
to cover masks they never take off.
I digress.  Intended to get in right off
that readers for whom English is new,
slough rhymes with slew,  not slow.
Some will tell you it is a coincidence.
They are the same people who joke they
are"slayed."  Those of us who've been forced
to howl for help pulling ourselves out know
the joke is on them.  Slain and slaughter
too apt.  Lived to tell, wasn't the slough's
fault.  (Even I  laugh when "slew of us"
pops to mind.)  As for despair, shouldn't
have air.   Muck can easily suffocate.  
"De" at the beginning short for Devil?   
I have got to get out of here!   Go buy
a discount skeleton and neon-orange string
of lights.  Maybe a rubberized black widow
looks like it is spinning a fire-resistant web.
Who knows?  May meet a friend.  May see
an oak or maple just put on a killer red
dress laced with gold.  Slough may dry
while I am gone?  It can happen, I hear.
Now, about that exhibit. . .

..    

 (c) Phyllis Jean Green, October, 2009

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Slough Gives Way to Casper the Ghost"
Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on October 12, 2009
Breathtaking! Each time I read this it is different. The complexity of the poem mirrors the complications of the subject matter. Near the end you drop a beauty bomb with the line:
" May see
an oak or maple just put on a killer red
dress laced with gold."
Your talent is magnificent.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 12, 2009
clever!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
A wonderful creation. Love the images and line breaks.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
Reading this feels so comfortable, like a conversation in person. Very enjoyable:) Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
A most interesting rant, Pea.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
"...now the joke are on them..." a literary calling to send in the clowns!

Georg


Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
ah.such great visions in this..you had my head spinning...lol wtg Pea!!
:)Christine

Reviewed on October 10, 2009
(((Pea))),

Much thought in these lines - very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and loves ya, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
Love it Pea, you have such a tongue in cheek approach in this one that makes your fun halloweenie night a slough treat indeed.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
Pea,
The art of deliberate rambling perfected, the tangents make the poem, are the poem. Love it!

John

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
I especially appreciated the approach that despair shouldn't be given air. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
Good one. Guess not for ATC, Pod?

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
BOY! THE THINGS THAT SOME THINGS REMIND OF US....SCARRY!! DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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