This is a revision of fluff I entered into a contest centering on a theme about the wisdom (or not) of going full-steam-ahead. Damn the torpedoes! Open the throttles! Fly so fast, you burst into flames!! Art, like fire, destroys and creates. Or am I just looking for an excuse to stay up all night? So peaceful. Hear the Muse whisper.
Then again, it's the perfect time for fireworks.
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Thank you so much for being here. Keeping the fire burning! Pea
“Stop burning the candle at both ends!”
Sage advice if you hope to live
To see a hundred candles set ablaze
Atop a cake you're too bored to eat.
“Don’t be a night owl! You will get circles
Under your eyes. Turn down that flame
And get yourself in bed. Won’t dream,
But you will get rest.” And that is all.
“I’m a phoenix!!” my mother used to shout.
“I’m a phoenix!!” Light burned day and night,
Not just in her eyes. “Always serve as a bad
Example!” she crowed, and she let ‘er rip.
The albatross never wound up with its tail
On fire. Too busy waiting for light to take off. Dodo bird didn’t burn to death, it let go.
Make me an eagle into pyromania!
Want to be fire red. Blue, purple, gold.
Want to warm hands and light eyes.
Give off sparks that make andirons glow.
Maybe I’ll be a comet. Who knows?
Phyllis,
This has the kind of carefree that comes with being open to new things or a beginning. I readily admit to being the owl with the dark circles. I like the creative symbolism in this poem.
Sheila
Seems we do have much in common burning that candle at both ends. Sleep who needs it, there is just too much living to do and I do enjoy taking it all in, wondering writing...
I love this Pea, but I am a night owl and I do burn it from both ends...I shall heed your sage advice..thank you, you rock!
Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
Fantastic, dear Pea! Filled with so much spirit and energy. You undoubtedly lit up your readers with this light and carefree poem. Blessings to you. Take care always.
Brilliant, Mama Pea, and I wanna be just like you when I hatch and grow up cos i is basically a little chicklet from Andromeda too!!! Was our Grandaddy a peacock, you think??? Givin us all dem kaleidoscope coloured eyes and tail feathers?! Birds of Paradise is what us 24/7 peeps are, me Sweet Turtle Dove... Birds of Paradise... LOVE THIS, PEA!! It fluffs me up! :)) xx
there lives here a message,a plea -- someone searching, seeking recognition, "Want to be fire red. Blue, purple gold. Give off sparks that make andirons glow" -- peace and love be with you -- JM
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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This has the kind of carefree that comes with being open to new things or a beginning. I readily admit to being the owl with the dark circles. I like the creative symbolism in this poem.
Sheila
Be always safe,
Karen
Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
Love,
Sheri
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
If we all did that, imagine what we could accomplish!
Newfie Hugs, Rose
You are a rare plant in the forest.
enjoyed ...
richard
Yes!
John
Want to warm hands and light eyes.
Give off sparks that make andirons glow.
Maybe I’ll be a comet. Who knows?
Soaring and blazing sentiments, Pea; thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Peace, Carin'