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tanka
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My first tanka. Hope I got it right.

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic responses to my snow job...er, I mean, poem. Doing my best to make the best, could say. Coldest winter Carolina has seen in I-don't-know-how-long. Between that and all the milestones that January
brings my way, takes a village [in which y'all are V.I.P.'s] to keep the doldrums at bay. B l e s s . y o u !

~~


Poem Artwork


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have to forgive me
though the sky seems to be proud
of the tears it prompts
not just ducks who join her troupe
weeping willow acrobats


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          (c)  Phyllis Jean Green

                   January, 2010

 

Painting is The Weeping Willow by  Karen Magulis

 


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 Reviews of "tanka"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on February 1, 2011
Tanka. I have no clue being an ignoramus. Lovely form though, in tune with the painting. Gotta pull a Susan now and Google. Bye. Patrick

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
Tankras could be trantrums for all the sense stupid me makes of them.

Ron

Reviewed by Susan Smith
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
I never knew of the tanka poem. Had to google it. Thanks for the lovely poem and enlightening me.
Susan

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 25, 2011
A tanka it is Pea -- and up to your fine abilities my dear friend. The willow is the sage of verse and prophet for encounters of the heart. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 24, 2011
lovely write

Reviewed on January 23, 2011
Warmth. Springtime rains and growth. BEAUTY in your Tanka, Miss (((Pea))). Undone by its graceful elegance. Brilliant!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 23, 2011
Thanks for the Tanka; a marvelous painting, too.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on January 23, 2011
what doldrums? ;-)
nice capture.
carolyn

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Unique wording. Just right for a Tanka:)
Sheila

Reviewed on January 22, 2011
beautiful.....painting too! Morgan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Your tanka leaves the reader with lots to think about and taste as you offer pictures of the mind...
fee

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Beautiful tanka for a beautiful painting. By the way...no snow here but it is a cold winter so far...it is down to the high 50's and low 60's here in California...I have never had to wear my long sleeve shirts so long before...it does take some getting used to.
Amor

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Yes, Pea, you've got it..
but then you've always had it -
ability, style, touch.

John

Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Beautiful tanka and picture, Pea; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Really nice Tanka and picture... Art at it's beat

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
The greatest. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Beautifully written as always, Lovely Lady. I like the Art too.


PEACE AND LOVE
TONY

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
By jove, Phyllis, I think you've got it.
And a pretty thing it is too.
-gene.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
To me this is a rich surrendering, full of artistic style and personal insight. Besides, it's fun!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Happy Birthday

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
This is absolutely beautiful! The painting made me pause and climb into its depths before reading this awesome poem. I'm in awe. Even your words are like a work of art.


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