Yes, well done Rockie.
I can imagine Jesus knocking all over earth.
Then, once in a while, somone answers the call.
It's more important than 911 call.
But in our ho-hum world, people are too intested in putting themselves as number one.
Rockie…..This is a beautiful verse it’s very straightforward
And honest... open that door you’ll not regret your heart and soul
Will feel the greatest love
The love of our creator
Chosen words painted a vivid picture in my mind
A fantastic message within this
Outstanding write!!
I want to thank you for stopping by my page
And leaving your finger prints on my work
Wishing you simple pleasures,
Memorable moments,
And a Christmas
That warms your Heart,
Peace love and Light…….Morning Star
The whole time I was reading this I kept seeing that great painting of this, you have really brought it to life, right in time for His birthday! :) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours-blessings, Michelle xo (PS-I agree with the first part of Charlie's comment completely, good job)
It is excruciatingly hard to write a religious poem that is not pedantic. This one comes out with a gently persuasive tone, and a light, but penetrating message. Good job.
It's great to see you advancing as a writer, poet and crazy-mad scientist. I hope you exceed your own expectations.
A beautiful testament to Grace never barging in: gentle as a Lamb, He is! Well done, Rockie.
(((HUGS))) love and Merry Christmas!, Karla.
Reviewed by Eileen Brannon (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2008
You never cease to amaze me with your skills. With open heart I pray you always will be. I have printed your poem and will be using same in my next Sunday School lesson when I teach in January. Love always and a privileged to call you nephew and friend.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2008
Revelation 3:16 So then because thou art lukewarm, and neither cold nor hot, I will spue thee out of my mouth.
Revelation 3:18 "... and anoint thine eyes with eyesalve, that thou mayest see.
Revelation 3:21 "To him that overcometh will I grant to sit with me in my throne,"
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The mind of a Poet is a creative engine of beauty, wonders and grace to diffuse love, harmony; to learn and to teach; to instruct Solons and to inspire kings and Sovereign queens; to defend art and the language; and to stimulate intuition and imagination.
I love your name. This poem is so "direct" in truth and the style of putting the words in this manner puts more impact on the message.
A great write and a blessing to read.
Cynthia
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
To some he knocks softly...and to others he pounds and pounds.
Wonderful writing!
Carolhawks
Rockie,
This says it all, Rockie. Jesus is standing at the door of our hearts, waiting...He never gives up on us, nor does He leaves us. This write is awesome, my friend. It should be on everybody's fridge and church bulletins.
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A WARM Spiritual Connection!
My door is always O P E N and to my heart!
Warmest Blessings Friend, Purple Lady Passion, SHEE
At least they should etched this poem on the wood facing outside.
Georg
Sandie Angel :o)
In Christ's Love
Michelle~
Blessings J'nia
I can imagine Jesus knocking all over earth.
Then, once in a while, somone answers the call.
It's more important than 911 call.
But in our ho-hum world, people are too intested in putting themselves as number one.
Amen
JMD
And honest... open that door you’ll not regret your heart and soul
Will feel the greatest love
The love of our creator
Chosen words painted a vivid picture in my mind
A fantastic message within this
Outstanding write!!
I want to thank you for stopping by my page
And leaving your finger prints on my work
Wishing you simple pleasures,
Memorable moments,
And a Christmas
That warms your Heart,
Peace love and Light…….Morning Star
It's great to see you advancing as a writer, poet and crazy-mad scientist. I hope you exceed your own expectations.
My door is open. Let HIM IN! --Charlie
(((HUGS))) love and Merry Christmas!, Karla.
Revelation 3:18 "... and anoint thine eyes with eyesalve, that thou mayest see.
Revelation 3:21 "To him that overcometh will I grant to sit with me in my throne,"
*************************************************************** <
The mind of a Poet is a creative engine of beauty, wonders and grace to diffuse love, harmony; to learn and to teach; to instruct Solons and to inspire kings and Sovereign queens; to defend art and the language; and to stimulate intuition and imagination.
In respect,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
This poem is an ode to the One we both adore, Jesus Christ our Lord and Saviour. Your heart is showing and we are blessed by it.
Linda
I love your name. This poem is so "direct" in truth and the style of putting the words in this manner puts more impact on the message.
A great write and a blessing to read.
Cynthia
Wonderful writing!
Carolhawks
Be always safe,
Karen
This says it all, Rockie. Jesus is standing at the door of our hearts, waiting...He never gives up on us, nor does He leaves us. This write is awesome, my friend. It should be on everybody's fridge and church bulletins.
Many blessings,
~Linda
Very nicely penned . . . crisp and sharp!!
Always the Best,
Lance
Regis