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When Natalie Dances
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*Artwork "Natalie Dances" by Amor Sabor 2008

*Happy Valentines day to all at the Den...each one of the ladies can take this poem as a token of my heart as I dedicate it to you authors and readers alike. May your heart be filled with the true love you deserve such as this...


“When Natalie Dances”

When Natalie dances, everyone smiles
the whole world watches her every move
Her skirt twirls in an ocean of colors
that even old backyard dogs can see
They say that when she was young
her innocence had become a religion
because she could convert civilized man
with the brazen art of her sensuality

When Natalie dances, I become a saint
sealing my eyes and all my thoughts
with the paint of opaque distraction
and immediately drink away my dreams
For every time she would look at me
she would draw me in with her desire
and I would have to chase her away
with a shovel full of incoherent words

When Natalie dances, music begins to play
and I become completely awash in guilt
for listening intently to her sensual cries
and for wanting to fully understand her
for my heart goes out to her in the cold
knowing I could be playing into her hands
and it never fails to amaze me at how easy
it is to be kneeling before her altar

When Natalie dances, I feel her rhythm
It is translated even through my bones
and I waltz throughout her imagination
as soon as her feet touch the floor,
Bereft of the dignity that fails me
the moment that she takes my hand
and her bright eyes gaze into my soul
as if my flesh was as translucent as glass

When Natalie dances, even women sigh
deriving that vital energy from her youth
if only for a fraction of a punctuated dream
one laced with the perfume of perfection
Simultaneous, I relive a past through her eyes
in an indeterminate sentence of indiscretions
and my frail heart begins to decompose
when I no longer taste the salt of her tears

© 2003-2008 Amor Sabor
   

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 Reviews of "When Natalie Dances"
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on January 13, 2011
Absolutely exquisite in every way...I shall read it again for Valentines Day this year! Thank you for this exceptional poem...
Hugs, Diana...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on November 11, 2010
Lovely, thank you friend. xxx

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 5, 2010
You truly have a romantic soul. I love everything about this right from the title. The imagery, the sensual feel,your use of words...I am so happy to have found your work.

Reviewed by Esteban Martinez
Reviewed on February 21, 2010
Nice work - keep it up!

Reviewed by Lynette Bat-Abba
Reviewed on September 2, 2009
Oh, your writing stirs the hearthstone of human existence! Wonderful! You have a new fan, Amor.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Oh how you always write with such beauty...it's been awhile....but your writing has always inspired me. Thanks, Melissa

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on June 23, 2008
So very beautiful! From the soul of a Master Poet. SC

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on May 23, 2008
Penned by a true romantic~! And you chose the perfect way to illustrate the poem. Love the soft colors and sensuous movement.
An unconscionably late but very sincere Happy Valentine's Day to you!! <3 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle
Reviewed on April 25, 2008
I liked this particular poem because it shows how powerful body language can be and how the one who sees the dancer interprets the dance and the woman itself. Often the woman has no clue how beautiful she seems to those who love her. That said, love is blind, deaf and sometimes really dumb. But always truthful and painful and alive!

Very powerful imagery and I am certain all the women here appreciate your beautiful testimony to women everywhere!

thanks

katie

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
I am in awe of your knowingness when it comes to WOMAN!
A delight for the heart , mind and soul.
Exceptional work.

You are a multi-talented man indeed..
Blessings,

vesna :)

Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
Amor, this poem is so well written that it's a joy to read. How romantic, but not cliche'. I just love your artwork, too.

Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Powerfully intense feelings expressed lovingly! Amor
thank you for such a deep and intence expressive heart offering!
Write On!
HaPPY! Valentines to your heart always!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexoo

STay Positive!
STay STrong!
Love your new Bio page!pict, hit them ivories slowwwwwly...

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
A valentine I must treasure. The poem is scrumptuous. Beautiful work. The end heart wrenching. Love it.

Reviewed on February 24, 2008


A belated thank you, "When Natalie Dances" ultimately sensational along with your wonderful artwork.

Be well, wishing you many blessings Amor,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
A most beautiful Valentine poem, thank you, love, Holly

Reviewed by Saberi Roy
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
wonderfully crafted Amor. Your poetry dazzles! pleasure to read you always...S

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Amor,
You have captured her innocence as well as her sensuality with these verses. As always, your imagery is strong and romantically phrased to melt. Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
An exquisite look at When Natalie dances
The beauty of the dance of love!
I love the awesome imagery captured
By your beautifully chosen words
Are you sure your not Valentino!
A truly romantic dance!!
I hope your Valentine Day was a beautiful one!!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Beautfiul write and wonderful sharing of your heart with our hearts :-)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
0oops, I think this page is for
ladies only.
Excellent Amor.
Stay safe
Ron

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Wow, I love this, I can see so many dances and ages of a woman in your wonderful poem, from the innocent to the exotic, the natural to the poised, wonderful stuff- blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Thank you Amor for your beautiful offeing, filled with a passion tender and dear. Wonderfully written. Happy Valentine's Day to you and hope your's was filled with love.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Selene Skye
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
O my goodness this is exquisite, beautifully written!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Nicely written, and lovely to breathe in..Happy Valentine's Day to you to!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Amor you encompass all facets of women with this superb poem! It is a wonderful gift to read. Thank you!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
When Natalie dances the whole world stops to admire her passion. Natalie is all the great passions of so many women. She is the best in love, desire and emotions. She IS passion!

Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Beautifully written piece depicting all the love one can muster and so delicately penned. Hope your day was filled with all the expectations that love can bring......



Be always safe,

Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Thank you Amor it is a lovely Valentine offering. Natalie is delightful.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
The sway of the hips, the energy and the beauty of her dancing would entrap any man. And we women watch and wish we were she, if only for a dance. Obviously, I'm thinking back to another time and place, and still wishing ...

Beautiful painting! You are a man of many remarkable talents.
God bless you. Happy Valentine's Day! Kathy

Reviewed on February 14, 2008
I'm sure all the ladies will appreciate and enjoy your beautiful poem Amor.

Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Lovely poem and artwork, you must be a romantic. Happy Valentine's Day. :)

Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Beautiful, Amor, thank you! Happy Valentine's Day to YOU.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Awwwwww how sweet you are...Happy Valentine's Day Sweetie...Kissess

Reviewed on February 14, 2008
Awwww, Amor, this is beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing! Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)


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