sometimes it seems…I only wait for the spring to come
to awaken to those mornings when gardenias fill the air
so I can think of you just as clearly as if you were here
where I hold you in the dawn when the sun begins its climb
to listen to the ocean as it thunders destiny within its waves
believing deeply that you hear the echoes that I also hear
subtle is that gardenia when it settles in for the cooler night
but I can count on its reminders of dreams we have shared
sometimes it seems…that I can only dream from far away
and yet I know that it becomes a mirage on a sandy beach
while I await for your arrival and an embrace from long ago
that does not disappear or dissipate in the windblown mist
reverberating gently in the once empty chambers of my heart
while your soul passes through me leaving me with a smile
and a tingling left by your fingertips that have laced my neck
simultaneous with the taste of a maraschino kiss upon my lips
sometimes it seems…as if I was meant to dream of such things
that tear me away from solid ground where the roots entwine
of a blooming gardenia that grows fondly in a special place
reserved for those precious moments that you and I often share
in a garden that we traverse from west to east as we breathe
sighing as we close our eyes and imagine what love means
when we only meet in dreams and whisper each others name
during those gardenia mornings well before the year must end
oh oh this speaks to me so much! I adore everything about it, and the first line "sometimes it seems…I only wait for the spring to come"... just draws you right in. It's perfect!
Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2013
What a poet you are. I love the emotion that you weave through your works.
Oh, Amor! This is m e s m e r i z i n g. So like the startlingly sensuous and impossible to describe scent of a gardenia. Glows like one! Not that I am telling you anything, but it is also very much in keeping with the fading line between poetry, prose poetry, and 'sudden' or 'flash' fiction. Fiction may not fit. Reads like mini-memoir.:)
Love the passion that comes through and the fluidity(for lack of a better term).
Written with such sensitivity from the depths of your soul, Amor, and all throughout the scent of that gardenia wafts in ~
Wonderful energy and presence.
Blessings, xo
Christine
... like one, long, lovely exhalation of love and consciousness before taking in the next wonderful breath of the gardenia's enduring scent and spirit-laden, memory-filled fragrance. I think our olfactory sense is the most acute when it comes to recreating images of people, time and place. Fabulously flowing and yet tightly controlled writing that is wrought from a profound well and life-spring of experience and longing. Just beautiful, Amor! xx
This carries the heart as the sweet scent of gardenias carries the imagination!
Love ya!
Jane
Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2012
If only gardenias could blossom all year round for you. This is such a beautiful poem and I totally agree with, Belle. You are one of the few that can write so effortlessly when it comes to love, romance and your heart, my sweet friend!
Incredibly powerful and beautiful. Amor there are a few men in the world whose great romantic hearts are in sync with a brilliant intellect, you are one of those rare ones. Nothing sweeter, more sensual and rejuvenating than the scent of gardenia mornings.
Oh how I love gardenias, they do not grow here
but I was born and raised in California and we
had a bush with this lovely white delicate
flowers with a beautiful smell. Their petals
so delicate you could not touch them or they
would bruise...
What a lovely romantic sharing of such wonderful
emotion, one of love for this lucky woman :)
Shirine McVey discovers that twenty years of her life have elapsed since she went to sleep in a hotel room in El Paso, Texas. And worse, she is married to a man she doesn't know.
Love the passion that comes through and the fluidity(for lack of a better term).
Thank you, my friend, thank you.
xOx Phyllis xOx
you romance our hearts Amor
and bring love into new dreams
sandlewood memories
& warm beaches
Vickie
:) Janna Hill
Wonderful energy and presence.
Blessings, xo
Christine
Love ya!
Jane
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
giving off the powerful yet
delicate scent of a gardenia
in the distinct aroma of love
Lady Vivian
but I was born and raised in California and we
had a bush with this lovely white delicate
flowers with a beautiful smell. Their petals
so delicate you could not touch them or they
would bruise...
What a lovely romantic sharing of such wonderful
emotion, one of love for this lucky woman :)
Love and Light'
Lily
Ron
Regis
and fluency of feeling combine
effortlessly; yours is an exceptional
mind, Amor, and your poetry has such class
john
Joy L. Hale
Lovely the scent of gardenias. Beautiful love
traverses in this romantic poetry.
Lady Mary Ann
Anna