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In Synthasia's Eye
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Synthasia walked a loose tightrope
between heartbreak and the moon
a thin line between yesterday and today
metered finely in seconds that passed
accumulating into minutes and hours
while counted off in the distant beating
of an old heart too often filled with love
and with a pause in an aching dream

Synthasia knew not what was coming
for she had stumbled upon a row of tears
that she had left behind her on that road
that she had traveled quite infrequent
turning abruptly left into a wanton maze
of lingering regret and desperate anonymity
with curves that defied perpetual motion
and gravity equated to too much ventured

Synthasia viewed the world in chapters
neglecting the reason for being a woman
when the whole world spun in tangents
and reasoning no longer filled the void
between her truth and a vain existence
stepping into the darkness of her being
emerging on the opposite side of heaven
where the crowds are the most expected

Synthasia saw everything except my love
She, too comfortable standing in her shoes
Upon ground once considered sacred
Where not even demons would traverse
She lingered too long in the inversion
That captured the essence of my being
And became ensnared in the invisible
That projected deep into hallowed ground

"We can never give up our dreams...for they are what holds us like the gravity of our souls" - Amor

© 2007-2013 Amor Sabor
 

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 Reviews of "In Synthasia's Eye"
Reviewed on March 22, 2013
good to see you around....well done! would expect nothing less ;) I can envision a row of tears. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2013
Something exotic, something mystical, something metaphysical in the physicality of this exotic write permeates and suffuses the imagery and the ideology created by these four stanzas: may the invisible not liberate as easily as it ensnares? or maybe the inversion, layer upon layer, subverts itself in an essence that ultimately transcends "hallowed ground" to attain an apotheosis whose allure even Synthasia cannot resist. Food for the god of thought, is it not?

Wonderfully wrought poem, Amor.

Roger

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on March 21, 2013
Deeply engrossing and romantic. Some can see what is beyond....M

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2013
I agree with John Flanagan, Amor, that this is "writing of a higher order." My first impression for the feel of this writing was the word "abyss," as in bottomless...not as in abysmal. Depth and charge of energy in dark and light colors: "....moon/a thin line between yesterday and today,"..aching dream,"and gravity equated to too much ventured." The yellow highlight for me is the line: "emerging on the opposite side of heaven." Wonderous writing! ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 18, 2013
Goodness, Amor, you have such intimate insight into a woman's mind! You write of such complicated love with rare tenderness and understanding.
Blessings, xx
Christine


Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 17, 2013
~Amor~
Romantic and sacred capturing the essence of your poetry.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Karen Springer
Reviewed on March 14, 2013
Love this...your word choices make me hear the ticking heart, and I can clearly see the image of indecision as the ground swallows her up...well done!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 14, 2013
Deeply meaningful and imagination-awakening are your verses, Amor. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on March 14, 2013
So beautiful and emotive Amor, as always.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on March 13, 2013
You are soooooo right Amor! Good write.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 12, 2013
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! '...aching dream'--- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Synthasia saw everything except my love'--- VERY BEATIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 11, 2013
It's good to read you again. Synthasia sounds like a lost love that didn't understand the inner poet in you. But then, she may be a metaphor for something entirely different I haven't discerned yet.

Ron

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on March 11, 2013
Enamored with your poetry *Amor*
forever a romantic who writes
so beautifully from the heart

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on March 11, 2013
Very nicely done, Amor!! Beautifully phrased!

Anna

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 11, 2013
it's been six months since i read your
quality poetry, Amor, and for me
that's six months too long.
This is writing of a high order but then
with you it always is.
good good good to see you posting

john

Reviewed on March 10, 2013
I came upon this poem and I'm so glad that I did. Your writing is dark and romantic. Beautiful write.

Love ya!

Jane


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