to her, I was that thunder in the distance
to me, she was a soft whisper in my ear
in an effort met without any resistance
and with one purpose discernibly clear
I loved her despite my being anxious
returned was a special look in her eye
there was never a question to answer
and between us we had no reason to lie
the heartbeats of both two were together
where alone, a cacophony would induce
the silence would accompany in whether
we would in time and by distance seduce
the reason why she and I were not able
to consummate what both of us shared
was our story between fiction and fable
though the heart of the matter was bared
we craved each other much more prophetic
than any words in a book could ever tell
more than any rhyme or meter as anesthetic
or what a magician could ever do by a spell
we traveled in the dreams of our rapture
and embraced in the midst of our prayers
in and out we persisted only to capture
the essence that resides when one cares
through logic we reasoned to be grateful
each other would continue through years
to know that our hearts were still faithful
and celebrate all by the shedding of tears
to her, I was that thunder in the distance
to me, she was a soft whisper in my ear
it would only be by our hearts insistence
that we both loved so well without fear
'COURTLY LOVE'...ITS ENDURANCE AND YET DEEP AND GENUINE SINCERITY AND PASSION...CAN NEVER BE UNDONE, FOR THE ILLUSION OF 'PERFECTON' IS FED ON SUCH. WELL DONE, ARMOR...WELL DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING AND I WILL KEEP THIS ONE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The number of reader comments can serve to show you how far this poem resonates. So effective is your delivery of this, that I feel it is composed in notes which are right in the center of hearing range for human hearts. What rings long after, in my eyes, is "...loved so well without fear." Love without fear, gorgeous words standing next to each other. ~~ Diana
Superb craftsmanship in these touching and tightly-woven verses, Amor. The lines are almost perfectly of a length and the energy and emotion never weaken or falter. Your narrative builds to its triumphal conclusion flawlessly.
My favourites among many lines are:
was our story between fiction and fable
though the heart of the matter was bared
and
it would only be by our hearts insistence
that we both loved so well without fear
Nothing is as powerful as a true heart that is focussed on its love and fed by its conviction. xx
Absolutely beautiful Amor...yours is a gift so rare and special...
I love the contrast of the thunder and the soft whisper....elegantly romantic...
Perfect...
Diana...
Sometimes, I think I can feel someone I'm connected to...like we're on opposite ends of a string. This poem reminds me of that feeling. Nicely penned, Amor.
A beautifully expressed and penned post, Amor. I especially love the lines "to know that our hearts were still faithful and celebrate all by the shedding of tears." Does distance make the heart grow fonder? Perhaps so. Joy
Amor your poetry always lives and breathes romance. A man such as you with his romantic heart and passionate pen is thunder and lightning as well! Always penned to perfection.
simply magical amor...oh my, what a beautiful piece to read leaving one wanting to know more and dreaming of ways to resolve the bitter sweet sadness...so well put together...p
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My favourites among many lines are:
was our story between fiction and fable
though the heart of the matter was bared
and
it would only be by our hearts insistence
that we both loved so well without fear
Nothing is as powerful as a true heart that is focussed on its love and fed by its conviction. xx
I love the contrast of the thunder and the soft whisper....elegantly romantic...
Perfect...
Diana...
each and every time <3 you're beautiful poet!!
Through Thunder & Soft Whispers
Forever Love & Poetry
Vickie xx
Hearts insistence of thunder in the distance
or a soft whisper loving so well without fear.
Beautiful to celebrate the love.
Lady Mary Ann
Love ya
Jane
Ron
I know that you do this best- Roseline
Gorgeous, sentimental, and just amazing romantic poetry!
Lovely work as always,
Amber
Anna