Daughter of Zeus rides the eloquent dawn
on midnight stallions to an apocalyptic moon
relaying without hesitation all of her desires
with her long hair flowing in constellations
as Venus watches inspired in the distance
with her mouth agape and eyes wide open
She returns with dawn in synchronous time
to wash the sleeping valleys with a red kiss
and to spread the scent of jasmine in the air
married with the fresh salt of a pacific storm
with colors of songs and aromas of smiles
to coax soft memories from their rigid perch
She opens her arms and embraces the world
teaching all of the exotic birds the art of flight
while waiting for the white gardenias to bloom
in the innocent splendor of untouched virgins,
and in anticipation of pink roses and carnations
for the early spring to wear as badges of honor
The daughter of Zeus caresses the morning
as she brings with her the secrets of heaven
whispered from the lips of sensuous angels
tucked beneath the satin of her folded wings
and disperses them in the breeze for lovers
in the form of a rainbow in a golden sunrise
She reclines next to me in remarkable dreams
while in the beauteous nudity of eloquent youth
while my eyes drink the nectar of her essence
She weaves her magical spells of enchantment
and without even flinching an eye as I kiss her
or whenever I adoringly paint her with my body
When she leaves she takes with her the horizon
and uncurls it turning it inside out like the sun
and I pronounce it as a star for her evenings
to shine warmly upon us as we melt into one
exchanging cells in an unforgettable embrace
and transferring our energies in a tireless ritual
I worship her while becoming the rings of Saturn
to revolve around her every minute of the day
like separate entities in an endless universe
swept away in Magellanic clouds of ecstasy
accompanied by the symphony of bright stars
and a chorus of angelic voices in the crescendo
The daughter of Zeus has already claimed me
and I, in turn, submit to her deep, fond wishes
and without my asking for anything in return
except for the chance to perpetuate her love
as I track her with beating heart and keen eye
to always be there the moment she awakens
This poem is dedicated to Tinka Boukes as she has been so patient as I finally take time to post. My appreciation to you Tinka...for your kind and generous support of my work.
Amor
Oh! my God!!!
I don't believe my eyes!!!
Crying!! Really no jokes I am crying my eyes out!!
Shit wait!!!
Okay let me try again
Amor?
THANK YOU .....THANK YOU...THANK YOU..
This I do NOT deserve....this is tooo much..
But will except this with great Honor Amor
You made my day........my year....my heaven...to light up with a million bright and beautiful stars......
Let me pinch myself to see if I am not dreaming......no this is for real...
I thank you once again...You are a darling forever in my heart.if thats okay with you?
This was just wonderful, What a beautiful poem for your freind!
Reindeer
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Wow Amor. First, it's wonderful always to see you posting. Second, I love the classical bent of this work, and as usual, you never fail to disappoint. Bravo on a fine work. I love it. Has a calypso rhythm to it.
I call this magnificent and Tinka most fortunate to be named in this poem that approaches perfection!
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Beautiful words
from the Master of
romance.:)
Excellent!
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
Amor, this is a very worthy dedication to a lovey Lady. You know what sets your poetry off from most others? It is delivered with great professional class and style. That is great. I can imagine what your journey has been like to arrive at this point in life. But you will still grow and grow. Bill
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
I am sure she feels as I do it was worth the wait.
In the predawn hours during a solitary ride on her ranch, Montana Freeborn collides with Seth Phoenix, centaur-turned-man and the embodiment of her psychic visions.
Book 2 of the romance trilogy Horses of Tir Na Nog
Life for CJ, and Shawn, has taken on new meaning and a wonderful turn. Never in a million years did CJ think she could be this happy. With her new husband and closest friends in tow, she’s bound
Adam
or perhaps to merely coat it
Simonize her lovely emotions
so smoothly she won't know it
You're a smoosher, a Mr. Slick
a true romantic at heart
You've written well your thoughts
and completely played your part
What love spurns you on
I have to sit and wonder
What doth eat at your soul
what powerful inner hunger?
What e'er it is you call it
All I know is it's a stranger
for when I once gave into it
I knew not of the danger
One man once wrote such things
in perfect rhymed poetry
Expresed eternal devotion
and said he'd always love me
But somehow the journey
from what was and was intended
was twisted and winding
as it led him to what's ended
Now all I've got are dreams
and memories of what could have been
I'm left holding promises
that were never meant to mend
So lucky is this girl
the one to whom you write
Happy she must truly be
to look thus in your sight
Congratulations to her
the one that inspired this poet
Congratulations to you
for knowing that you know it!
I love the last stanza best!
Wow!
excellent tale and flow.
peggy
"quoting the entire poem"
Absolutely astonishing
despite the fact that she is taking Erato´s
job... considering that Phoebus is an
admirer of this particular daughter, all
turns back to poetry, and brings me back from the Olympus to say:
I have read a Paean in a Poem dedicated to a deserving and -unique Daughter of THE GREAT POET!
This poem, "Daughter of Zeus" is a collector´s masterpiece.
I Salute the Author of "Daughter of Zeus".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I don't believe my eyes!!!
Crying!! Really no jokes I am crying my eyes out!!
Shit wait!!!
Okay let me try again
Amor?
THANK YOU .....THANK YOU...THANK YOU..
This I do NOT deserve....this is tooo much..
But will except this with great Honor Amor
You made my day........my year....my heaven...to light up with a million bright and beautiful stars......
Let me pinch myself to see if I am not dreaming......no this is for real...
I thank you once again...You are a darling forever in my heart.if thats okay with you?
Love Tinka
Reindeer
Love, Elizabeth
from the Master of
romance.:)
Excellent!
~~Linda~~
--Karissa
Haven't seen you in awhile...
Beautiful outstanding write...
Trixie :)
welcome to All of you home
congratulations on your newborn child, I weep tears of happiness for you.......