My skin becomes startled in your gentle touch
My heart wedged in the blue flesh of yearning
My drought riddled eyes open in the lightning
and the flashing thunder of your honest gaze
My ears once closed to a cacophony of voices
listen intently to the melody of your sighs
pirouetting in the equator of your smiles
marching in the parade of your spoken words
My hands tremble in attempt to measure you
to gauge the genuine warmth of your heart
Tall fences tumble in the pastures of strangers
when distance becomes conquered in dreams
While young girls are awed in their reflection
you come clear into focus from the inside out
There is a glow in the aurora of your soul
that emanates to brighten the darkest night
and there it resides in the point of a lone star
eliciting the wide carousel of my imagination
You are a point in a lone star as twin stars go
with a sweet potato pie sitting in the window
while strangers pass to get a glimpse or whiff
to give equilibrium to the roller coaster of life
You already know the rhythm of my heart
for you see it clearly in the eyes of Mexico
and both our souls dutifully fly at half mast
in the twin towers as well as at the Alamo
Oh My! You have captured so much in this poem Amor.. I know the twins so well..they are so compassionate and you have referenced the WTC here, as I know from over the years, how they began writing and discovered their voices, when so many lost their own..and I love that you wrote- there is a glow in the aurora of her soul..and so respectfully ended this piece- I've bookmarked this..this is so
impressive and so wonderful.. Donna
This was a lovely tribute, very beautiful, and so well done!
Reindeer
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Oh Amor what a pefect name for you...a heart of gold so beautiful and flowing poetically bold! This is a wonderful tribute for Karen...such a precious beautiful gem for a lady most deserving!!!!
~Nikki~
This is absolutely beautiful. A wonderous tribute to one of the Den's most precious souls. Happy birthday Karen and Karla for tomorrow and great write, Amor!
With Love,
Jill :)
Such a beautiful write for a person you respect so much. :-)
*Marlene*
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
"...You are a point in a lone star as twin stars go
with a sweet potato pie sitting in the window
while strangers pass to get a glimpse or whiff
to give equilibrium to the roller coaster of life...
You've captured so much of her with this work, Amor. Bravo. You are a dear, and she is a sweetie.
((((AMOR)))) mi amigo, muchas gracias! you are so sweet; i am already getting spoiled (and it isn't my birthday until tomorrow!)! what a generous, heartfelt write; this touched me to the very depths of my soul! thank you so much for writing this beautiful poem about me. i wish i could do the same for you, but i am not nearly as talented a writer as you! compared to you, my works don't equal squat! LOL i will treasure this always! ((((((((HUGS)))))))) and much love to you from texas way, your (grateful and touched) friend, karen lynn. :) >tears < (tears of joy)
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
impressive and so wonderful.. Donna
Bless you...
Deborah :o))
Wonderful poem! You sly one you!
Thanks for reviews!
Adam
Reindeer
~Nikki~
This is a beautiful tribute to Karen, with very inspiring meanings in every verse! You are a Master at what you do!
Hugs,
Maria
Love
Tinka
With Love,
Jill :)
*Marlene*
with a sweet potato pie sitting in the window
while strangers pass to get a glimpse or whiff
to give equilibrium to the roller coaster of life...
You've captured so much of her with this work, Amor. Bravo. You are a dear, and she is a sweetie.
A lift of spirits, certainly.
Gina
it! ;-)and your writing is not squat silly, it's wonderful!
A truly wonderful dedication to a lovely lady.
Beautifully written.
~Chrissie
o, this is beautiful...you've made karen's day with this outstanding write (and mine, with your dedication to me, "titanium heart")
thank you from the bottom of our hearts...
(((((HUGS))))) and love,
karla. :)
we are blessed to know you, amor--vaya con dios!
Write on!
Leland