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Lone Star (Dedicated to Karen Vidra)
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My skin becomes startled in your gentle touch
My heart wedged in the blue flesh of yearning
My drought riddled eyes open in the lightning
and the flashing thunder of your honest gaze
My ears once closed to a cacophony of voices
listen intently to the melody of your sighs
pirouetting in the equator of your smiles
marching in the parade of your spoken words
My hands tremble in attempt to measure you
to gauge the genuine warmth of your heart
Tall fences tumble in the pastures of strangers
when distance becomes conquered in dreams
While young girls are awed in their reflection
you come clear into focus from the inside out
There is a glow in the aurora of your soul
that emanates to brighten the darkest night
and there it resides in the point of a lone star
eliciting the wide carousel of my imagination
You are a point in a lone star as twin stars go
with a sweet potato pie sitting in the window
while strangers pass to get a glimpse or whiff
to give equilibrium to the roller coaster of life
You already know the rhythm of my heart
for you see it clearly in the eyes of Mexico
and both our souls dutifully fly at half mast
in the twin towers as well as at the Alamo

© 2003 Amor Sabor

from "The Dedication Series"

*Dedicated to one of twin stars that shine without fail and without clouds here at Authorsden.

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 Reviews of "Lone Star (Dedicated to Karen Vidra)"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
Such unique imagery, Amor! You have mastered words:) Sheila

Reviewed by Donna Maris
Reviewed on March 20, 2004
Oh My! You have captured so much in this poem Amor.. I know the twins so well..they are so compassionate and you have referenced the WTC here, as I know from over the years, how they began writing and discovered their voices, when so many lost their own..and I love that you wrote- there is a glow in the aurora of her soul..and so respectfully ended this piece- I've bookmarked this..this is so
impressive and so wonderful.. Donna

Reviewed by Poetry Deborah
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Wow! Truly inspired by a good and honest soul. Wonderful, moving!

Bless you...
Deborah :o))

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on February 19, 2004
This describes Karen to a T!
Wonderful poem! You sly one you!
Thanks for reviews!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
What a unique pre-birthday gift!

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Beautiful... just beautiful!!!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
This is such a wonderful poem and tribute to Karen (twin star)

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Awwwwwww 'tis a beautiful pen you hold dear Sir.....this is perfect....thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
I imagine the object of this poem matching line for line. You are a lucky man.

Adam

Reviewed on June 26, 2003
This was a lovely tribute, very beautiful, and so well done!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Oh Amor what a pefect name for you...a heart of gold so beautiful and flowing poetically bold! This is a wonderful tribute for Karen...such a precious beautiful gem for a lady most deserving!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Amor,
This is a beautiful tribute to Karen, with very inspiring meanings in every verse! You are a Master at what you do!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Beautiful beautiful beautiful....Master of out hearts!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Beautiful beautiful beautiful.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
She is a most gracious person, and has always encouraged me.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
This is absolutely beautiful. A wonderous tribute to one of the Den's most precious souls. Happy birthday Karen and Karla for tomorrow and great write, Amor!
With Love,
Jill :)

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Such a beautiful write for a person you respect so much. :-)

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
"...You are a point in a lone star as twin stars go
with a sweet potato pie sitting in the window
while strangers pass to get a glimpse or whiff
to give equilibrium to the roller coaster of life...

You've captured so much of her with this work, Amor. Bravo. You are a dear, and she is a sweetie.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
What a lovely idea, Amor: a series of dedications!

A lift of spirits, certainly.

Gina

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Amor this is another breathtaking jewel, captures Karen's beauty so well.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Amor you are a touch of class in a mundane world!Karen, You deserve every bit of
it! ;-)and your writing is not squat silly, it's wonderful!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
very nice

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Amor,
A truly wonderful dedication to a lovely lady.
Beautifully written.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Beatiful tribute, Amor! Well done!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
A beautifully written tribute to such a deserving Angel of den. An absolute beauty. ~SH~

Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Lovely tribute...excellent write.

Reviewed on June 25, 2003
(((AMOR)))

o, this is beautiful...you've made karen's day with this outstanding write (and mine, with your dedication to me, "titanium heart")

thank you from the bottom of our hearts...

(((((HUGS))))) and love,

karla. :)

we are blessed to know you, amor--vaya con dios!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
A great tribute to a great lady. May you both bask in the smile of Lady Luck.
Write on!
Leland

Reviewed on June 25, 2003
((((AMOR)))) mi amigo, muchas gracias! you are so sweet; i am already getting spoiled (and it isn't my birthday until tomorrow!)! what a generous, heartfelt write; this touched me to the very depths of my soul! thank you so much for writing this beautiful poem about me. i wish i could do the same for you, but i am not nearly as talented a writer as you! compared to you, my works don't equal squat! LOL i will treasure this always! ((((((((HUGS)))))))) and much love to you from texas way, your (grateful and touched) friend, karen lynn. :) >tears < (tears of joy)


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