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Her Noun
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I have always believed her saving grace to be
without any hesitation, her incredible noun
One like no other that I had ever known before
Although it was true without a shred of proof
that vinegar and oil do not very well mix
Although there was no longer reason to deny
that I would be better off thinking clearly
without her noun stuck in my parched throat
without it dancing nonchalantly in my eyes
like an exotic belly dancer in a private oasis
while my tongue swayed to her angled hips
like a captive cobra mesmerized to her music
so that my dreams would be vulnerable again
so that my imagination would be predestined
wrapped in the deep blue sheets of this fantasy
Yet, even in my slumber I was surprised to find
my hips still moving to the tune of her sensuality
It would be nearly impossible to think otherwise
for without her noun, I would sink to the bottom
for I was but a gyroscope in the bowels of a ship
drifting aimless upon the sands of an arid desert
finding no comfort under the hot scorching sun
until her noun became an ocean to inundate me
and her whispers were winds that filled my sails
and the impetus of my past proved my direction
aware that she was a stowaway in my dreams
Yet knowing her presence proved that I existed
and that I had been born only to serve her well
And when the music stopped, she turned to me
And as she smiled, the universe fell to my feet
as stars and comets and all space in between
black holes, nebulas, planets and moons alike
concentrated to light up my destination and path
And it was then that it all became so clear to me
that I finally discovered the real meaning of it all
when I found the name of her noun…was “love”

© 2003 Amor Sabor

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Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
n i c e

your muse runs hot these days, old friend...
how nice.

**Me**

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
I was (with my over active imagination) starting to think her noun was something else... (well,you have been naughty in past with some of your poems...hot hot hot! ) so finding her noun was 'love' was a relief and delight for me.
This poem was very original,witty and beautiful too.
Best wishes
from
kay.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Mesmirizing as always...beautiful!!!!!!

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on October 5, 2003
Just a little loving suggestion. you could have said a lot more with less words. Other than that, Her noun is truly Her noun
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2003
This is a classic!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Exceptional write, Amor...
Jenni

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
"Yet, even in my slumber I was surprised to find my hips still moving to the tune of her sensuality " ---YAOWZA! I loved the way this moved ME!

I enjoyed the creative way you you approached this. A noun. Now, verb :) Leaves the reader with warm fuzzies and a big smile.

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Exceptional piece! Bravo.

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
Smooth from beginning to end, but I confess to favoring:

"...Although it was true without a shred of proof
that vinegar and oil do not very well mix
Although there was no longer reason to deny
that I would be better off thinking clearly
without her noun stuck in my parched throat..."

Those are lines I wish I'd written.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Amor,

Love the verbiage in this gem. Exquisitely graceful. Simply superb!

Tami

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Such a flowing visual explosion all in the words here.
"I found the name of her noun…was “love”"
LM

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
stunning flow of imagery!

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
and you have done her noun justice, as only you can do

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
You've shown that it's not just a noun but a verb as well. Absolutely beautiful!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
This is absolutely beautiful and so heart touching. Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Mesmerising poetry. Superb, Amor
~Chrissie

Reviewed on September 30, 2003
To read... and float... and soar high... and dance with... and, in awe, find that all through this marvelous experience, we have been enjoying the most perfect... sabor de amor... **smile**
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Wonderful visuals..

Reviewed on September 30, 2003
This was so lovely and beautiful, I love your poetry so much, deeply moving,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Amor, spectacular writing hardly covers it. You are so gifted with the use of words!Love your work!This one is stunning;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Ai!! You took my breath away once again!!

You are an amazing poet Amor!!

Thanks for this beauty!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
**sigh**
Beautiful, Amor
Exceptional!

~~Linda~~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
What a thing of beauty this is, no more perfect word than this "one" you have captured so beautifully in your poem, Amor.

Reviewed on September 30, 2003
wow! a breathtaking journey you took us on, amor! outstanding erotica! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. *gasping for breath* LOL

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Love it. And may I say that is the longest sentence in the Universe....[smiles]


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