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artwork "Ancient Sky" by Amor Sabor
oil on canvas (1/4 view of total image)

"Ancient Sky"

Each star is a grain of sand
on the beach of an ancient sky
upon an indigo blanket of space
in the light of the Creator’s eye
Within the multitude of these grains
albeit lost in this blue-black sea
but even the faintest stars prove
the insignificance of humanity
In day, these all become forgotten
until we look at them now and then
for we pay far too much attention
to the irrelevance of mortal men
The Creator has been more than kind
to provide us with fruit, flower and tree
but we pride ourselves in technology
just as if somehow we were he
The serpent knew of our shortcomings
and his great legions dutifully applaud
when bridled with the freedom of choice
we audaciously choose to be like God
But that is vanity working overtime
as imperfect creatures that feign to vie
for our breaths are much fainter yet
within that light of an ancient sky

Amor Sabor

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 Reviews of "Ancient Sky"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on March 29, 2008
Amor,
This is a different facet of your view on nature. Your message is deep and filled with wisdom. Fantastic:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on December 2, 2007
Very nice!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
This is quite an interesting write. You do well with the rhyme, and it doesn't sound Hallmarky. The painting is fabulous.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
What a beautiful painting and words. So good to see your inspirational writing again....I've been away for too long. :)

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on February 4, 2004
Profound and insightful write..enjoyed this...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on January 31, 2004
Beautiful images.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on January 29, 2004
Ah, what wise words, Amor; they play and repeat in the mind and heart like a haunting song. Your painting is beautiful too.

Peace.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
This is exquisite Amor, all your poetry is worthy of a prize! Congrats on the well deserved contest win.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 24, 2004
We are but faint when lost in the ancient sky.

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
CONGRATULATIONS, AMOR! A well-deserved win for a classy entry into the contest! Nicely written mixture of prose and intellectual speculation. Great work!

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Hi Amor
Ovations to you, my friend! I should like to hear this read out.
So powerful! Thank you for keeping connection with the den.
Vicky

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Amor.. what a beautifully expressed reminder to us all that there is something more vast, more confounding and far more mind-moving than our need to outdo each other or to surmount the glorious universe... this is a fantastic piece of writing.. you've made me proud and delighted to know I am in your company, as part of AD. Congrats! you're entirely deserving... katy xox.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
This piece is most deserving of the win, Amor!
Congratulations.
I will be stopping back at your pages. I see that
we have some things besides poetry in common...
photography, fine art, and music. I greatly admire
your outlook on women, too!

Reviewed on January 21, 2004
A wonderful piece for the winning!

CONGRATULATIONS AMOR!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
Amor,

You have always been wise and talented, but I am blown away by that picture you've painted and this wonderful poem! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on January 15, 2004
Amor....Ive missed reading you... beautiful write!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
I am STUNNED Amor!!!! I wonder if I can find words to describe what you have just put into motion by this magnificent piece..*smile*
..the art?...it is glorious!!!!!!..note the TWO clouds..ever so close...TWINS of the creator..a symbol of the Twin Flame...*smile*..you didn't think I'd MISS noticing that ..did you?...
Brilliant work...you are an artist indeed...may you always bless us with your brilliance..

vesna

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2004
Such a gem as the sky deserves your attentions with words. Gorgeous poem!

Happy New Year!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 8, 2004
i am in awe...both wise words and fantastic art.........you are gifted and blessed
pax
A

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

"Ancient Sky"
Wonderfully written, what a joy to share
such an inspirational piece from your heart!

Thank you
Gwendolyn


Reviewed on January 7, 2004
This was beautiful, outstanding poetry, and what a beautiful painting!

Reindeer

Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Magnificent Sky, Amor... wisdom, beauty, art - in words and stunning painting - and that Light, truly unique, that enfolds our Soul when we... so small... stand in the summit of a mountain and from there imbibe... the infinity of the Ancient Sky. All beautiful and harmonious things for you.
Blessings*Love*Dreams
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Amor I'm so thankful I did not miss this one! I'm awestruck by both your poem and painting! Your wisdom and beauty of mind,shines forth in both!Bravo!
(Thanks also for your concern dear friend!)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
superb wisdom of the ancients ...

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Eloquent and so important ... odd to use 'beautiful' and 'terrible' in one sentence..but so it is. Lovely painting and poetry...terrible truth.

Thank you,
Gina
P.S.: your first name put an old melody in my mind... I can't remember the artist/band...do you?

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
I agree Amor your work steals my breath...beautiful...ty, Dani

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Within the multitude of these grains
albeit lost in this blue-black sea
but even the faintest stars prove
the insignificance of humanity

-- As always beautiful words!
Happy 2004!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Beatifully expressed and deep in significance. Thank you for this offering, Amor. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Amor, your artistry is as magnificent as your poetry filled with power and truth! Keep it up. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Amor,
Powerful message here and your painting is like a breath of clean crisp air.

Nice to read your exceptional work again

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Enjoyed the write and the artwork very much.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
nice work

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
This is so insightful, I love that, and the artwork looks great as well. I think it is wonderful when people's rhymes sound so natural as yours do, plus, yours have the benefit of also having such meaning.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Wise with ancient wisdom! Great write and the painting is breathtaking!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Hi Amor,
Standing ovation!!!!
Very powerful message..


Excellent as always...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
EXCEPTIONAL piece and art Amor,
Happy 2004 to you and your family.

"The serpent knew of our shortcomings
and his great legions dutifully applaud
when bridled with the freedom of choice
we audaciously choose to be like God
But that is vanity working overtime
as imperfect creatures that feign to vie
for our breaths are much fainter yet
within that light of an ancient sky "


Debashish Haar

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
"The Creator has been more than kind
to provide us with fruit, flower and tree
but we pride ourselves in technology
just as if somehow we were he "

Your words touched my heart amor...if we only would learn and stop destroying Gods handiwork...your painting is lovely....an artist too...you are talented my friend...lovely work both poem and painting..floria

Reviewed on January 5, 2004
lovely writing, amor; and the artwork is fantastic! BRAVO, dear friend; very well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Amor,
This is very beautiful! I wasn't sure what I would
find when I clicked on the title,
but I was not disappointed(though I never am
when I read you). Such a peaceful,
tranquil feel to this. I enjoyed it!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed on January 5, 2004
(((amor)))

dear friend, this is a masterpiece--BRAVO *applause*

stunningly written and the artwork is GORGEOUS--well done

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Awesome work! Magnificient! Bravo!
Bravo! Bravo! The canvas is Beautiful!
You are so talented! I wish you many
blessings in 2004!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Stunning, stunning, stunning...just plain Stunning Amor!!

Wow!! Unbelievable


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