artwork "Ancient Sky" by Amor Sabor
oil on canvas (1/4 view of total image)
"Ancient Sky"
Each star is a grain of sand
on the beach of an ancient sky
upon an indigo blanket of space
in the light of the Creator’s eye
Within the multitude of these grains
albeit lost in this blue-black sea
but even the faintest stars prove
the insignificance of humanity
In day, these all become forgotten
until we look at them now and then
for we pay far too much attention
to the irrelevance of mortal men
The Creator has been more than kind
to provide us with fruit, flower and tree
but we pride ourselves in technology
just as if somehow we were he
The serpent knew of our shortcomings
and his great legions dutifully applaud
when bridled with the freedom of choice
we audaciously choose to be like God
But that is vanity working overtime
as imperfect creatures that feign to vie
for our breaths are much fainter yet
within that light of an ancient sky
CONGRATULATIONS, AMOR! A well-deserved win for a classy entry into the contest! Nicely written mixture of prose and intellectual speculation. Great work!
Hi Amor
Ovations to you, my friend! I should like to hear this read out.
So powerful! Thank you for keeping connection with the den.
Vicky
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
Amor.. what a beautifully expressed reminder to us all that there is something more vast, more confounding and far more mind-moving than our need to outdo each other or to surmount the glorious universe... this is a fantastic piece of writing.. you've made me proud and delighted to know I am in your company, as part of AD. Congrats! you're entirely deserving... katy xox.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
This piece is most deserving of the win, Amor!
Congratulations.
I will be stopping back at your pages. I see that
we have some things besides poetry in common...
photography, fine art, and music. I greatly admire
your outlook on women, too!
I am STUNNED Amor!!!! I wonder if I can find words to describe what you have just put into motion by this magnificent piece..*smile*
..the art?...it is glorious!!!!!!..note the TWO clouds..ever so close...TWINS of the creator..a symbol of the Twin Flame...*smile*..you didn't think I'd MISS noticing that ..did you?...
Brilliant work...you are an artist indeed...may you always bless us with your brilliance..
vesna
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2004
Such a gem as the sky deserves your attentions with words. Gorgeous poem!
Magnificent Sky, Amor... wisdom, beauty, art - in words and stunning painting - and that Light, truly unique, that enfolds our Soul when we... so small... stand in the summit of a mountain and from there imbibe... the infinity of the Ancient Sky. All beautiful and harmonious things for you.
Blessings*Love*Dreams
~Alexandra~
Amor I'm so thankful I did not miss this one! I'm awestruck by both your poem and painting! Your wisdom and beauty of mind,shines forth in both!Bravo!
(Thanks also for your concern dear friend!)
This is so insightful, I love that, and the artwork looks great as well. I think it is wonderful when people's rhymes sound so natural as yours do, plus, yours have the benefit of also having such meaning.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Wise with ancient wisdom! Great write and the painting is breathtaking!
Hi Amor,
Standing ovation!!!!
Very powerful message..
Excellent as always...
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
EXCEPTIONAL piece and art Amor,
Happy 2004 to you and your family.
"The serpent knew of our shortcomings
and his great legions dutifully applaud
when bridled with the freedom of choice
we audaciously choose to be like God
But that is vanity working overtime
as imperfect creatures that feign to vie
for our breaths are much fainter yet
within that light of an ancient sky "
Debashish Haar
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
"The Creator has been more than kind
to provide us with fruit, flower and tree
but we pride ourselves in technology
just as if somehow we were he "
Your words touched my heart amor...if we only would learn and stop destroying Gods handiwork...your painting is lovely....an artist too...you are talented my friend...lovely work both poem and painting..floria
Amor,
This is very beautiful! I wasn't sure what I would
find when I clicked on the title,
but I was not disappointed(though I never am
when I read you). Such a peaceful,
tranquil feel to this. I enjoyed it!
Reflections and Nature Watercolors is a collection of Margaret's spontaneous positive thoughts in celebrating and reflecting on life and her nature watercolors.
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
This is a different facet of your view on nature. Your message is deep and filled with wisdom. Fantastic:)
Sheila
Peace.
Ovations to you, my friend! I should like to hear this read out.
So powerful! Thank you for keeping connection with the den.
Vicky
Congratulations.
I will be stopping back at your pages. I see that
we have some things besides poetry in common...
photography, fine art, and music. I greatly admire
your outlook on women, too!
CONGRATULATIONS AMOR!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
You have always been wise and talented, but I am blown away by that picture you've painted and this wonderful poem! ;) Silver
..the art?...it is glorious!!!!!!..note the TWO clouds..ever so close...TWINS of the creator..a symbol of the Twin Flame...*smile*..you didn't think I'd MISS noticing that ..did you?...
Brilliant work...you are an artist indeed...may you always bless us with your brilliance..
vesna
Happy New Year!
pax
A
"Ancient Sky"
Wonderfully written, what a joy to share
such an inspirational piece from your heart!
Thank you
Gwendolyn
Reindeer
Blessings*Love*Dreams
~Alexandra~
(Thanks also for your concern dear friend!)
Thank you,
Gina
P.S.: your first name put an old melody in my mind... I can't remember the artist/band...do you?
albeit lost in this blue-black sea
but even the faintest stars prove
the insignificance of humanity
-- As always beautiful words!
Happy 2004!
Powerful message here and your painting is like a breath of clean crisp air.
Nice to read your exceptional work again
Standing ovation!!!!
Very powerful message..
Excellent as always...
Trixie :)
Happy 2004 to you and your family.
"The serpent knew of our shortcomings
and his great legions dutifully applaud
when bridled with the freedom of choice
we audaciously choose to be like God
But that is vanity working overtime
as imperfect creatures that feign to vie
for our breaths are much fainter yet
within that light of an ancient sky "
Debashish Haar
to provide us with fruit, flower and tree
but we pride ourselves in technology
just as if somehow we were he "
Your words touched my heart amor...if we only would learn and stop destroying Gods handiwork...your painting is lovely....an artist too...you are talented my friend...lovely work both poem and painting..floria
This is very beautiful! I wasn't sure what I would
find when I clicked on the title,
but I was not disappointed(though I never am
when I read you). Such a peaceful,
tranquil feel to this. I enjoyed it!
Hugs,
Maria
dear friend, this is a masterpiece--BRAVO *applause*
stunningly written and the artwork is GORGEOUS--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Bravo! Bravo! The canvas is Beautiful!
You are so talented! I wish you many
blessings in 2004!
Wow!! Unbelievable