This is a Valentines Day dedication to all the women of Authorsden. Every one of you is beautiful and precious to me. I ask you all for your forgiveness as I have been away for so long. I pray that you do not forget me in my absence. Ah, Kate...you killed me at last...but what a way to die...so fitting on Valentines Day
"Emotions Curve"
Emotions Curve -02-11-04
My emotions curve to meet you
to echo the silence of the dawn
as light splinters into the room
through partially open blinds
True love radiates like the sun
bouncing upon every surface
exposing with the truth of light
what is kinetic in heart and soul
Our dreams are bullets in the dark
striking head-on with accuracy
exploding upon impact in reality
while living the impossible dream
Your whispers become a vapor
those that drift from a silent night
like a ghost breaching darkness
slicing precisely upon my core
You wear intentions like a uniform
those aimed directly into my heart
replacing an apathy with devotion
and inspiring me with your warmth
Each glance translates that love
and can never be misinterpreted
for the truth lies within your eyes
as my emotions curve to you
I've been away as well Amor- and I can honestly say- you have not lost your touch, nor your "curve" well done, and so very appreciated-
Donna
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Your whispers become a vapor
those that drift from a silent night
like a ghost breaching darkness
slicing precisely upon my core
..sigh...
Glorious..magnificent..embracing..mmm..love this..what a soul...what a Being!!!! Wow!!!
"our dreams are bullets in the night" WOW AWESOME BRO..........I think you should be the romantic poet of the internet....... As always your writing is impressive and anointed
Cheers
Alain
Awwww, Amor, this is sweet! What a sweetie you are; you made my little Texas heart skip a beat! What a beautiful poem! Happy Valentine's Day (belated) to you; hope it was happy! I had a good one; even got SNOW for Valentine's Day (four INCHES; but it melted by day's end..DARN!)! But BOY, did it ever make for excitement while it was still around; even made a snowman and got into several snowball fights! I had a BLAST!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Forget you? Never. (And, oh, my gosh... I received a Valentine today - Yea!) What a beautiful write, Amor. I especially like the last two verses. Thank you. Happy Valentine's Day to you and yours.
Oh, Amor, as usual your mind is sheathed in gold and it drips from your heart to your golden quill on to a pure emerald canvas: exquisite. Why am I not surprise, Poet Master? ~~BonnieQ
Amor you lit up the den with your beautiful gift of words.We are fortunate to have you here to add beauty and class in your distinctive style. Thank you! May your valentine be as happy as you made us;-)
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Thank you!
Enjoyed this one.
Donna
Your whispers become a vapor
those that drift from a silent night
like a ghost breaching darkness
slicing precisely upon my core
..sigh...
Glorious..magnificent..embracing..mmm..love this..what a soul...what a Being!!!! Wow!!!
Vesna :)
Cheers
Alain
Amor, Keep exploding with every written truth,
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
very special and unique! Thank you!
I really like your style! Brilliant!
Hugs,
Tami
Excellent Amor!!
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Love Tinka
Hope yours is one you'll remember smiling
Reindeer
That what we should call you
Amour Poet incrediable.
Hugs to family and you.....
Happy Valentines Day!!!
right into the heart of this poem.
My favorite is the third verse.
You have been missed and would never be forgotten. Happy Valentines! Guess this mean's you forgive me for the killing? :-)