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Valley of Death
by Lloyd Lofthouse → (All Poetry by Lloyd Lofthouse)
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Thank you Phillip Morris
for the gifts.
 
Mom, Pop and The Horse
smoked
one after another.
 
As a child,
 fruit flies buzzed in my chest.
They were not common,
ordinary bugs
but elephants
with dragon wings.

On cold nights
their weight grew.
 
I gasped
turning blue,
a poor copy
of a Van Gough
blurry around the edges,
the colors blending together,
the faces indistinct,
hidden and lost in a miasma of color.
 
 
Silent storm clouds drifted across the ceiling
staining curtains yellow
and my heart black.

I sailed the years
with the Light Brigade
through carbon copy
canyons of death
along with a sand clock
running toward empty.

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 Reviews of "Valley of Death"
Reviewed by william sawyers
Reviewed on November 26, 2008
So very true, very well put.
From william L sawyers
The Child Author

Reviewed on November 26, 2008
Lloyd,

An excellent write ... I, too, am wandering around this shadow of death. Can't kick the durn things: have cut down, there's hope for me yet. =] Saving this one, think it's your best, yet.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Have a Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
Lloyd,
Gene's right, a government health warning, and my poison is Winston, nothing to do with Churchill although that's a brand I tried once, and only once. Seriously though, nice one, this!
John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
Lloyd, maybe they should insert a copy of this in every carton
of cigarettes. My downfall was Lucky Strikes: Be happy, go lucky.
-gene.


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