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Excuse Me
by dennis m stanfield → (All Poetry by dennis m stanfield)
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im telling you she was Hot..

 

I know she feels my stare

My eyes undressing her bare

Though I have on shades to block the glare…

I know she can feel

That’s why she can’t sit still

Lord forgive my thoughts please

I bet her honey attracts bees 

Her beauty is just captivating

Moments with her in the future I’m anticipating

Her clothes I’m desegregating

That means separating

Her long beautiful hair collecting sun rays

Her skin tone not worn from years and days

A love song in the background plays

The clothes she wears do her curves justice

And she knows this

Why else would she wear something so sexy?

And that smile… oh it got me

Her confidence is well deserved

Her body almost looks preserved

It’s in such great shape

Her figure my eyes can’t escape

She glances at me and flicks her hair

Awh she is taking me there

She knows I’m looking

So hot she has me cooking

I haven’t even got to her shoes yet

They absolutely complement her set

And shows off those smooth legs

I’m now leaning over the table edge

She catches me looking at her thighs

And all I can say is please excuse my eyes


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 Reviews of "Excuse Me"
Reviewed on March 26, 2009

Now I liked this for sure Dennis.
Definately a spoken word with much to say.
Enjoyed every line most especially at the end
"...She catches me looking at her thighs
And all I can say is please excuse my eyes"
You did a fantastic job loved it!

Have a wonderful weekend and take care,
Gwendolyn



Reviewed by Cathlene Sares (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2009
dennis,
Romantic, hot and sweet, and you didn't miss a beat (of the heart).
Loved it.
Cathlene

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,well now isn't this beautiful sweet Dennis,your feeling's are so ....breath taking.....I love every word you have written here..(sighhhhhhhhhhhh)as always excellent writing from such a romantic,and loving man...Hugsssssssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxoxo

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
LOL I like how you dsecribe your feelings towards this woman.Very good poem.Take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on December 6, 2008
LOL, love this, can hear it aloud, a great piece to be performed and would really live as spoken word.

Reviewed on December 4, 2008
Hello dennis,

You wrote this in a very honest, naked, naughty way. No excuse needed. Keep looking in verse!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 4, 2008
So I gather you took notice?? Beautifully descriptive as she had you melting away....

Be always safe,
Karen


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