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Salsa Jar
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An observational piece about a guy an an open-mic night. Some folks have complained about all the metaphor mixing. I told them "when the mind wanders, metaphors mix". Most just walk away at that point.

Salsa Jar      Ann Arbor – Spring, 2008
     (stolen from B. Luhrmann)

 
I saw a man with a big dent
in the side of his forehead,
angled just above the temple.
He sat quietly, drinking
a green and thick concoction
from a “Tostito’s” brand salsa jar.
 
He had long, greasy hair and
a receding hairline, bending around
into a widow’s peak,
and it surrounded the dent in his head
like dark, tropical arms of sand
orbiting a lagoon,
adding contrast to its lighted ridge
and framing its shadowed side.
 
He read poems about spectacular deaths
and graveyards and icky, morbid things;
drinking his thick pond topping,
from that washed out
salsa jar.
 
And it brought to mind the Sea of Tranquility,
staring at that dent and it’s shadowy ridge.
And I searched through his hair
for palm trees and coconuts and monkeys.
Wily monkeys bouncing in space suits
on the surface of the jar,
dying spectacularly in the
shadow of a salsa-tar muck pit,
green ooze congealing on
the greasy peak
of Widow’s Moon,
I sat alone, gravely,
watching a man
drinking from
his jar.
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "Salsa Jar"
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
A perfect concotion and mixed images :) I hate to say this, but I hate poetry readings because they are usually full of pretentious asses ("POETS"). This was cool.

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
You mixed everything well but I do hope it isn't jarred :)!

Sandy

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
It seems like the person describe in your poem had died internally and wanted to share his hearts demise with others through his poetry, so let us pray for his resurrected heart that he may live again! Thanks Joe, I could actually visualize that man as I read your poem drinking his ooze form thar used Salsa jar. Peace!!!

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Very interesting subject. You painted a vivid picture of this strange character with his jar of yuck. I enjoyed it.

Welcome to Authors' Den!
Connie
p.s. Just between you, me, and the four walls, I don't think you'll like my writing. ;~)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Fascinating, interesting perspective....

Be always safe,
Karen


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