This is sad yet lovely and precious. I do not know if you intended it to sound like a childs ryhme but it does to me and therein makes it also a precious write too!!!!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
It was a beautiful poem, John, and please don't blame me. I tried to shoo it out of the way as I passed your house but the darn thing wouldn't leave. I think it commited suicide.
Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
I loved this John...but how did the little bird die?
Tender and loving write...
I've often felt the same
after seeing a tiny bird
whos singing has forever
stopped. Your heart is
golden.
~~Linda~~
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2003
How absolutely lovely, John. The grace and beauty within your sweet rhymes is beguiling.. I do believe you have written this sweet bird's essence by writing this just as you have. A very moving write, indeed. katy.
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From One Old Fart Bird Lover to Another!
Bonnie
~Nikki~
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I've often felt the same
after seeing a tiny bird
whos singing has forever
stopped. Your heart is
golden.
~~Linda~~
Leland