Bullied. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 16, 2006

Outstanding expose, Kay!

My special-needs grandson was a victim of horrifying bullying; eventually, the police were brought in. What needs to be done, is preventive maintenance, rather than wait till it's out of hand, and often fatal!

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on November 5, 2006

I think this is good. I don't like bullies in any walk of life.
Well done Kay.

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on July 24, 2006

This is a very true and all too often familiar account of life at school which many I am sure can relate to all too easily,
it is brilliantly written by an excellent poet,
thank you Kay,

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 16, 2006

The bullies in schools are getting much worse and worse. The zero tolerance isn't heling the kids, they did not want to attend schools anyway, so it suits them well.

The parents are the ones who are really suffering! Too bad!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 11, 2006

Bullies, believe it or not are that way because they have low self-esteem issues & are unable to cope with acceptance from others. You wrote this so well and in such a phenomenol way.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 11, 2006

Well written Kay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Bullies usually get what's coming to them..
Right on write Kay..
Love ya!

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

So glad this is fiction for you. As one of the bullied kids in school, it's much like being pecked to death by hens...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Wow this could read as a commentary of our times, for although schools have introduced zero tolerence to bullying it seems the adults still haven't gotten the message. Well written and great message.

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Good work, Kay. I agree with Eileen.

Enjoyed your take on a problem that is endemic in society.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Excellent descriptions Kay! Such a sad fact that there are bullies not only of children many husbands (and wives) are bullies too and throughout all relationships we can find that we are harrassed by bullies in all walks of life. It is a despicable trait usually carried on from one generation to the next, copied from parents who are bullies. This is a great expose`/poem!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

i have been there, and i still remember the pain all these years later! powerful, heartrending write; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Regarding bullies I found when I saw them after they were grown, they all had white hair, or none, and/or they had cancer or some other debilitating disease...paybacks from the gods is a bitch...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

You've captured that distincitive sense of anguish perfectly herein, Kay!
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

its a heart break when a child gets bullied............
good write
pax A

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Bullies truly are a sad lot, Kay.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Painfully sad. Excellent poem