Prisoners escaping. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on June 10, 2012

Another fine write PM. We are our own prisons,
as we are too, our own salvation.

Namaste'
dan

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on January 25, 2009

Great write!
I do prison ministry. How about you?

JMD

Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2006

Thankyou for this write, very powerful. Once again you've drawn me into your world. I love it, and you thankyou.

Tim.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on November 15, 2006

There are few people that can admit that their pain comes from within themselves...denial usually exceeds admittance.
You sparked my inner self with this write!
Excellent, creative piece!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 14, 2006

marvelous poem but the end was unexpected and it is the end itself that this poem is so interesting. As I said many times in my poems nobody can free anybody unless sombody frees himself/hereself.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on November 14, 2006

Kay,

Neither am I able to access your audible voice...but you speak quite clearly through your poetry!

Excellent revelation!
Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on October 31, 2006

Unfortunately I could not hear your voice - but I guess the problem lays at my side.
Great writing, nevertheless.
Amira

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Fantastic write....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Oh your voice is so lovely
and the reading of it was beautiful
great job Kay
applause!
pax A

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

An outstanding write ..Kay
Great twist at the end
Love your work
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

Your wave is pewrfect and your poetic voice as your pens voice is so nice to hear... This is a powerful poem...

Light & Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Dear Kay,
I am only getting random words but your voice is very pleasant. And so is your poem. The problem could be my speakers. Love Joyce

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Let us hope the "escape" in beneficially therapeutic, Kay. Thank you for sharing your sentiments. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Hi Kay:

You have a wonderful voice! Enjoyed your recital! It is great to see you on the board once again!

Thanks so much for your prayers for my brother!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Kay the poem is outstanding as is your recital! If that's a first you are a natural! Wow! I'm so impressed!;-) It's so good to read you,as always, but to hear you is really a treat! I don't know how to download it any better, this was great!

Love and hugs to you!
Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

outstanding metaphor and powerful sentiment ... an introspective release of emotion that i find extrememly sad yet dearly moving ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Emotional offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Wow Kay, a marvelously sad write..
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SMooooooooo000000000000CH!

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

my dearest Kay, this is so sad, beautifully written and recited, as always,
but so very sad.
take very good care my Ozzy friend,
your pommy pal Steve

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

one of the saving graces of being female is the social acceptance of crying, knowing it releases so much.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

BRavo bravo, this is a truly poignant write and you can tell it is straight from the heart and passion motivated. Very good.

Fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Excellent, Kay, very emotional write too many will identify with; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Ditto Lisa's comment here, an all to familiar malady of the mind.
Ty for the wisdom,
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

I don't think I know anybody that can't relate to this.
Great writing.

Lisa