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Outside your world I watch a place that I have longed to be , through the thick walls that you built , to keep out trace of me. I watch you like a wondering child ( nose pressed to pane for sight , ) cliquish there , THE CHOSEN share, in groups ...forever tight. Being on the outside ,( by endemic brand ,) in a place condoned by you.... I watch...from OUTCAST'S land. Copyright � Kay P M-Devenish (P.S...........)!!!!!

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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 28, 2003

WOW!!!!

This is the real McCoy!!! Really strong, and damn fantastic.

Loved it, ty, Dani

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

what sad words Kay..noone deserves to be placed here.
A beautiful write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

A very unique write, pulls at the heart strings. If anyone has left you on the outside Kay, it is definitely their loss!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 21, 2003

Very interesting, Kay! Enjoyed this!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

well done!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Good work Kay and a cute smiley face

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Awesome write kate. love it.

peg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Awesome write Kay! I almost missed it, there are so many names now and they keep shifting around as the board changes, it's a challenge isn't it?;-)Love this poem and your little guys are so adorable,me peeks back at you;-)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Ah Kay, this was lovely, beautifully written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

I like this and I peek a boo to you too kay...floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Peek a boo Kay!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

oh i like this!!!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Excellent write Kay. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on November 20, 2003

Very nice Kay! Peek a boo to you too! lol

Jack

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