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The Hole Within
by Mark M Lichterman → (All Poetry by Mark M Lichterman)
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The Hole Within Lonely for the one I’ve said goodbye to though knowing it best for both her and me still ... still there is the hole within where love had been... where love still is. Lonely for the words we’ve said and the thoughts we’d shared and the countless lines of... Though distant as the moon lonely for the words of passion that were felt by both. Lonely for the world... Lonely for the world we shared bound by nothing more than the fingers that wrote the words that tightened the bonds of love in the world... That tightened the bonds of love in our world where only existed two of us. In our world where only existed her and me and our never to be... In our world where only existed two that loved and the long distance heart pounding love that could never be. Sorry it had ended? I know I should not be! Yet... Yet there is still the hole within where love had been... where love still is.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 22, 2010

A bittersweet offering which was very moving..

Hugs, Diana..

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on March 19, 2010

If it were me, I think I would feel forever blessed that I shared this kind of love with someone, although I'm sure I would feel sad
that it never came to be. I do believe once the heart has been touched by love, there is always a special place within it where
no one else can enter, nor can that love ever be taken away. This write is packed full of emotion, Mark, and it is quite evident
that it comes straight from your heart. Beautifully sad and heart-rending. ~Lizzie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

I am with Felix on this you were given the gift of love for however much time was yours to have, it is always a painful loss when for whatever reason it is not yours to keep...you still have the memories Mark.
I like your new photo

Carole~

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Very emotional write, Mark. Well done! You made me feel the longing that fills your heart.....very sad....

Anna

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

To be brutal, they said that after sitting on a thumbtack you will forget about it with time...but your butt won't.
No matter what, it hurts.

Georg

PS. You want love? wear a jock's hard cup! (LOL)

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on March 18, 2010

Lived a bit of this story long ago, took years to get completely over it. Maybe never did. Patrick

Reviewed by Felix Perry

The yearning I think never goes away when love is found but then lost or given up because of things beyond our control. Still...would we really want to erase that past love if we actually could or treasure the memories bittersweet as they may be.
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