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Old Man Old Woman
by Mark M Lichterman → (All Poetry by Mark M Lichterman)
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Old Man Old Woman

 

Shuffling by,

held with both hands,

she within the confines of her walker

he alongside with a hand held atop her hand

to steady his now unsure legs and,

throughout their sixty-five years,

his hand still felt most comfortable

when atop her hand.

 

Old man whom

at one time walked upright,

whom at one time walked steadily upon his feet.

 

Old woman whom,

at one time strolled upright,

whom at one time strolled steadily upon her feet.

 

Years turned back!

Time running in reverse!

Gray shaded under-eyes

gone.

Loosely hanging flesh

below eyes

below chin

low hanging

cheeks and jowls gone.

Wrinkles gone.

 

White cast eyes

once again deep brown and vivid blue.

 

Sagging breasts

now upright.

Hanging stomach and wrinkly buttocks

now gone.

 

Old Man

shuffling by

Old Woman

shuffling by

once at one time

youthful,

once at one time

lively

once at one time

lively and,

in their own way,

lovely

lovely and loved.

 

Shuffling by,

held with both hands,

she within the confines of her walker

he alongside with a hand held atop her hand

to steady his now unsure legs and,

throughout their sixty-five years,

his hand still felt most comfortable

when atop her hand.

 

Though the years have not

turned back.

Though time has not

run in reverse.

The old man’s hand

held atop the hand of the old woman,

each lovely in their own way.

Throughout the sixty-five years

of marriage,

the old man,

the old woman,

still loved,

still in love.

 

 

 

 

©September 30, 2011 / Mark M. Lichterman

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Old Man Old Woman"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Everyone wishes for a love like the one you describe here Markie
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 3, 2011
Aw! How truy heartfelt this is, Mark! A lifetime together...growing old together...don't hear much of that these days....what a shame! I loved this! Reminded me of my hubby's parents..in their nineties and still together...they were so comfortable together...and still loved each other after 70 years of marriage!!!! WEll done, Mark!

Your pal,
Anna

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 2, 2011
THIS IS ONE OF THE TREASURES OF LIFE THAT IS NOT OFTEN SEEN THESE DAYS...TOO BAD. AND I THINK YOUR LAST TWO LINES SUMS IT ALL UP; STILL LOVED...STILL IN LOVE. A BEAUTIFUL WORK...SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on October 2, 2011
Very visual, Mark. Such beauty in these years. A very emotional read. ~Lizzie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 1, 2011
Sooo beautiful, Mark!
I feel this one deeply ~
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 1, 2011
Mark this is a thoughtful and touching poem of the way it is for some, the lucky ones...it is so good to read your poetry again I have been gone from AD for awhile. This is a keeper
Carole~

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on October 1, 2011
A heartfelt poem written so tenderly and dear as always my friend well done poetry Laura

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 1, 2011
So beautiful Markie as this is the way it should be love in the beginning and the same love till the end.

Your #1 Newfie Friend Hugs XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on September 30, 2011
very nice write, I like it :-)


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