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Cool Water and You
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We met at the beach We were blankets away I kept sneaking a peek What more can I say Her smile could move mountains Her eyes were like diamonds I waved to her and smiled as well She wiggled her finger, to come by her I almost hesitated, but could not deny This woman my charming self...

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Reviews of "Cool Water and You"

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 10, 2012

Great writing.

Rose

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on July 9, 2012

Vistas of many colors at the beach
*Deborah*
beginning lovely like a rose that buds

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 8, 2012

I hope it wasn't nude beach so that you could see her smile and her eyes. I'm not sure about the last line, unless you were seeing yourself� Perhaps?

Ron

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on July 8, 2012

You are charming Deborah you can say so much in such few lines while painting that picture for us.

Like Jane said, a fun poem reflecting back to who you are... yourself! :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 7, 2012

So much goes on at the beach! This poem is fun!

Love ya!

Jane

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