"Love?" meaning so many different
things to each one *Deborah* who
is to say if it works or not
between two...but your poem sure
sounded like it did for them
You hit the nail on the head! I'm really surprised still have the title, “ Love,” available. I keep discovering that I'm using the same title over again and have to change the second one. Since it begs the question, perhaps the title should be, “Love?”
my husband gave a girl his comb when he was in 2nd grade
ain't that too cute? lol
Love is so marvelous
from the 1st love-which is nice
but being last is the very best! :)
You have placed a great deal of 'happening' into these few lines. The effect is complete revelation. Scrolling down to read your text, the first thing I see is the image of a precious braid, so cared for with ribbon, so shockingly truncated. Then, entering your poem, the words immediately interlaced into the painting and the lines read like a beautiful romance clear to the last provocative line, which bookended the experience of seeing the sliced, sacrificed braid. Artistic flare of line placement made this a fabulous poem to me; and it was enhanced with your last word "Love?" Marvelous writing! ~~ Diana
Crystal Reed thought she had met the perfect man. Instead she finds herself entangled in a web of obsessive love and dark secrets, a world that has become tainted by deception and treachery.
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things to each one *Deborah* who
is to say if it works or not
between two...but your poem sure
sounded like it did for them
Lady Vivian
Ron
ain't that too cute? lol
Love is so marvelous
from the 1st love-which is nice
but being last is the very best! :)
Love's Innate Hour Glass
Vickie
Love ya!
Jane
Good food for thought
Love and Light
Lily