Do you hear the echos
In the corridors
Of your mind
Do you sweep
Away the past
Pretending it didn't exist
Do you just love
To get by
Never thinking why
Let the echos subside
Put some of your past
In a dustpan-
For rainy days
Love from your heart
Always knowing why...
We need to let go of the past that is unbecoming to us,
until we do, we cannot move forward. So the dust pan
must be dumped cleaned off and move forward
So deeply moving and well written. Another fine piece of poetry!
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2012
This is a crunchy-good write, Deborah. Dustpan for rainy days is great, because it gives us permission to look at them 'on rainy days' when we might need or want to be sad or melancholy. Your last two lines are smashing. Knowing why....what a certitude to treasure. Thank you. ~~ Diana
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until we do, we cannot move forward. So the dust pan
must be dumped cleaned off and move forward
Well done Deborah
Love and Light
Lily
budd
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
To get by"
All too often some do.
Love ya!
Jane