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Vowed Their Love
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
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January 2, 2012


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Her heart
Washed up
Unto the shore

Where they first met
And vowed their love
Evermore-

A disconnection
Became apparent
She no longer owned herself

She loved and gave
Her all
It was never enough


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 Reviews of "Vowed Their Love"
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on March 14, 2013
Broken vows..Sadly written well
..So many people can relate

Lady Vivian

Reviewed on March 13, 2013
This is love to give your all...

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2013
I believe my take on this fine piece is different than the others. I believe she gave her all to you.

Di

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 12, 2013
The divorce rate is so high and the root cause in many cases is unfaithfulness. Sorry if this is your plight but the poem could be from many who have gone through this.

G

Reviewed on March 12, 2013
"Lose your love when you say the word, 'mine'."

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Karen Springer
Reviewed on March 12, 2013
Rich imagery with a starkness to it which speaks to the bleakness of loneliness and loss of self.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 12, 2013
Yes. This reality happens so often and it is so heartbreakingly unfair. Such a sad poem, because we all understand the truth behind it.


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