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Clothes do not Make the Woman
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The touch of her hand Gives me goose bumps Adding a fire to my soul... Lips pouting Trying to speak But, never trying to be indiscreet I knew her emotions Like they were my own Her kisses were lightning Bringing me down To my knees... Always on my mind Your perfume- Is flamboyant You wear only for me I don't care what you wear As long as you are comfortable Clothes do not make the woman We care about each other And you know where I stand Don't you?

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Reviews of "Clothes do not Make the Woman"

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on November 24, 2013

Absolute!!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on November 18, 2013

So true...nicely penned, Deborah...

Anna

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 16, 2013

Hello:

I wonder why you had used "she" "her" (third person) to describe her in you first 3 stanza's; but then on your last 3 stanza's you've switched to referring to "you" (second person). Perhaps I'm missing something in this poem. Anyway...please forgive me if I had offended you. Sometimes I don't understand.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 16, 2013

I wonder what a woman with closets full of clothes, purses, and shoes thinks about that. But then, you are no ordinary woman. Why does she have to wear perfume at all?

Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 15, 2013

No clothes certainly make the woman. Good one that pulls no punches.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on November 15, 2013

i do and i so agree
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on November 15, 2013

If she didn't know before, after reading this she certainly will. This is pointedly direct without trying to insert ambiguous words. This is honest, straight to the point poetry.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on November 15, 2013

Clothing is just so superficial. I understand exactly what you are saying. Very good!

Love ya!

Jane

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