To be able to relate
Exactly where I stand with you
Knowing I can tell you
My secrets, dreams and philosophy
To kiss you, Always
But, not today...
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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2014
Intriguing. Lovely drop of the end, which lifts the poem into a question. Such a strong two lines: "To be able to relate/Exactly where I stand with you." There is such respect in those lines. ~~ Diana
LOL! Another time, then... and I was just about to say that now is all the time there ever is - but apparently not; thank goodness, in this particular instance. Ah, life just gets in the way, huh?! :) Be blessed in 2014 and always, Deborah. xx
A young technician mourns his lover until he meets another man - a man with a secret. But there are other secrets as a jealous ghost returns to protect his turf.
A young technician mourns his lover until he meets another man - a man with a secret. But there are other secrets as a jealous ghost returns to protect his turf.
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