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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Traveled

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It seems so easy to take for granted the seasonal changes, but concern for climate change, small or large as man's impact may be, we must remain conscious that our innate solipsistic narcissism is not something our aesthetic nature can ignore...try as we might. May the journey never end.

Thursday, March 22, 2012


Poem Artwork

TRAVELED


 


 


Once traveled


    looking back is a


         smoke-filled window.


 


Once traveled


    The smoky windows rattle their endless resentment at the windy changes.


 


But...The changes


      The rattles


          The smoky windows


               Oh, how sweet their receding motion.


                     Oh, how sweet to breathe the air of the uphill movement


                             of struggling roots


                                  of rustling branches


                                        of open spaces crying to be filled


 


                                            with visions


                                     with excavations of the mind


                               with tempestuous truth


                         with directions into endless detours


                   with paths...trails...roads...


roads to be...once again...


 


TRAVELED


 

   


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Reviewed on March 22, 2012
This poem needs no introduction. Although I apreciate the sentiments to be wary of how we treat the earth. The movement, the feeling of busting free, perhaps escaping a the car after a long journey. A spring fling, yet so much more was conveyed in this.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 22, 2012
Excellent. The travel from here to there, from season to season, and from hell to utopia has many diverse and sundry expressions of change, some of which can grate upon our sensibilities and then there are some which brings a smile to our faces and a extra beat to our hearts. You capsuled all this very well in your poetry today.


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