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Like Cold from the Can

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

After watching a short editorial comment on TV last night, I was left with a renewed appreciation of both life and death, especially the inherent paradox...just had to put down some thoughts that might connect with others.

Thursday, April 19, 2012

Like Cold from the Can

 

From the hooded secrecy of its fear

even as it held tight its fading vacuum of time

the voice whispered

 

Alright

speak to me of

cold in the can

 

Grizzled time

leaned forward as

its clouds of yesterday

billowed thin toward evaporation

 

The morsels for redemption

bubbled  forth from many wanton caldrons of illusion

satiation of truth only comes

after regurgitation of fakery

and embracing of flames

 

But panic not

said it

rather know the inferno of light's rhythm and tempo

lives not by the shackles of enslavement

nor the taunting of control

but rather like life's breath

where imprisonment is not an option

 

Allow it to sustain

even as you rise into the unknown

for lest you trust the illumine

the abyss of icy coals invites only darkness

 

That realm where deception lurks

tears patiently wait

and louder screams prepare to

challenge your blackened void of choice

 

But the journey

will it be long?

 

Never ride life on the easy rein

seek out freedom where the sweat of loins

press hard into the girth of destinations unknown

even as chthonic demons await beneath

their honeycombs with scorpiat tails of starvation

ready the smile with milk-white caresses

should you writhe in their poisoned promises of sweet nectar

 

And signs

will there be warnings?

 

Such dependence is folly

goad your mount

trust rather the pure allegory of the moment

that ever-faithful place void of manipulation or planning

gallop past the brambles of impatience

toward the realm of perpetual Mother's offer

 

Allow the threshold of death to always be with you

trusting the last step across is into that Some Time

where the shedding of fears made metaphor

brings solace

even as you savor

what once was 

 

Like cold from the can

 

 



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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
Feel like I am floating in cyberspace as I read these lines. Floating here, swimming there . . . Your words best describe my feeling . . .

"But panic not
said it
rather know the inferno of light's rhythm and tempo
lives not by the shackles of enslavement
nor the taunting of control
but rather like life's breath
where imprisonment is not an option"

Getting ready to hit the dark street and walk the mutt, this poem will be zinging in my thought the whole time.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 20, 2012
"...trust rather the pure allegory of the moment.."
i think (dangerous word, think) that's where i'm at
and what i do..and "Allow the threshold of death to always
be with you" is demanding emotionally but can be handled
intellectually if that's what we want or need;
this work, Odin, draws and pushes me this way and that
and i like the motion

john


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