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Sharpening Ether

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Today, it is difficult to be only concerned with oneself, unless one is satisfied with the isolation of inertness.

Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Sharpening Ether

How Timid the Blade's Thrust

From where does the storm's grip begin?
Does lightning need the thunder?
Does passion need boredom's consent?
Or
Is passion inherent in breathing
Even for those who would spend their lives suffocated
By their own unwillingness to breathe?

Might the newborn sense such complacency
This breathing of one's conditioned breath
Unable to define one's own place
Shackled by other grown-up's lexiconic understanding
Open-ended description kept isolated

But know
Feel
Anticipate
Your personal flesh and suckling needs
Might be ignored
Growing up will be a bitch

Then acquiescence will take over

Who wants it to grow up anyway
Better to be kept like a society of ignorant parents
Controlled
Led
Kept in stalls of mediocrity
Risking no loss
No gain
No disappointment

But

Someday you will ask
Is that all there is?

And if you're lucky
There will be a light

The searing heat of the unknown
The eruption
The liquid seduction of pure rain
The feel of moist warmth beneath your limbs
As you lay upon the earth to reflect

Answers to the unanswerable
Begin to seep upward
Revealing direction still available

Will you be willing to listen?
To see?
To sleep with unfamiliar sunrises?

Ah

The deep breath
The sharpening of one's ether

Nirvana


 

 

 



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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 26, 2012
"And if you're lucky
There will be a light"

and i agree, it is luck even if the light
can be worked at or encouraged in oneself
and/or in others...as for "Answers to the unanswerable"
i wonder if we'll ever reach the point of not asking not
just because of indifference but asking might be distraction from
what's to be lived and enjoyed in the moment

sorry, i'm going on too long; i can't keep up with you, Odin,
but keep the flow anyway

john



Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 26, 2012
You have struck the crux of the matter, the great, muddled middle, followers all. For it is few that see the light that it is only thing they have, and not some exterior manipulator, that rules their lives. Great insight, well applied.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 26, 2012
To reach an understanding with the pearl which lives inside of you, dormant, but there, waiting patiently for you to strike that mental wooden match which will sine its glow upon it, and now the fun and excitement of living life can truly begin.

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
Well composed, Odin


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