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POV

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Nothing like a Holiday weekend coming up to jog your childhood memories and their continually changing perspectives.

Wednesday, May 23, 2012

POV

As morning fills with bacon smells
the eggs patiently waiting
the splattered grease staking out its zone
my dreams awake
my eyes pop open
today is special

Dad knows atop his shoulders I'll straddle
'til I don't
'til his neck goes tweek
then it's stroller time
the tandem pull-behind
my "to infinity and beyond"

The world knows this hand-me-down stroller's no thing to prize
this rusty scourge of Nature's norm
the sounds ill fit for man
or beast
always needs oil
these wheels long on life-support

But rust on rust
they need not hear
for like the horns from 10th Ave canyons
blaring up and past my window sealed
progress needs little reminding
that aches and pains
are but life's norm disrupted
known as noise of sorts
breaking Nature's calm of sorts
noise being noise of sorts

My bars
their bars
growls sometimes friendly
sometimes not
tweeted song
bellowed song
bringing such laughter
bringing such tears

But back to task at hand
the wheels they do shout
Screezit
Screezit
Screezit

Til Dad's steady hand
drip drip

Scrazet


Scasat


Sca sa



A  sa




Ahhhhh


Little 3 in 1
so little for so much
he loves to say

Quietly we roll
into a subway car loud
silent smiles say it all
the Bronx Zoo looms ahead

That place where imprisoned people
peer in
as other caged creatures
peer out
across their motes
beyond their fenced world
scratching heads and asses
they gaze stupefied

Mom and Dad whisper

Amazing

Simply

Amazing

Yes it is
nod all

Yes it is
thought I
so long ago



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Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 24, 2012
Such a sensation of joy in this for me, and your point of view resonates delightful authenticity!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 23, 2012
POVs indeed, Odin. I am fascinated by the "through the eyes of the child" because I personally can't crack it: there's too much of the adult's eye-view and terms of expression that come in in my work, rather than explaining WHAT the child sees and in ways in which THEY express such. But you certainly capture here how BIG some little things can be with that delightful passage about the 3-in-1 and translate it wonderfully in what you write. After all, ALL things are big in the life of a small child, including this magic with the oil can. This, to me, is the most authentic child's-eye part of the poem. A lovely portrayal of quiet family ideals existing within the pacey urban environment. xx

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 23, 2012
Odin,
for sure my friend.
Budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 23, 2012
Yes, you "thought so so long ago," but as you mentioned in the pre-poem rundown, "your childhood memories and their continually changing perspectives."

I would imagine, from your perspective now, concerning the caged creature might be a bit more on the animal rights perspective. Could be wrong . . . but ...


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