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Prisons of Fear

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After reading Mary Ruefle’s essay “On Fear,” I was struck by how difficult it is to distinguish emotions from feelings.

Saturday, June 2, 2012

Prisons of Fear

 Ghosts of experience
Pain once felt
Forever present
Lurks in one's mind-cave
Refracting light
Mirrored on all sides

Even while concealed beneath ethereal fog
Huddled with festering scabs of trust abandoned
Patience anticipates the hour glass of courage draining

 Shades of agony
Parade in shadows
As sands of time and space
Await to trigger fear
Knowing such torturous weaponry
Remains far greater than pain itself

Easing forth as doubt and despair
Dread enters theses reflective walls
Invisible to light
Empty of its own reflection
Its image but a moist acknowledgment
Atop the lip
Inside the arm's cavity
Beneath the groin

 Thus enters the mystical
Initiating birth of reverence
Impelling us to love the most
That personage who loves us most

 Hence the eidolon rises
Hooking any and all on holy dread
From teachings unsolicited
By a lamb of duplicitous intent

Yet

 Like the wolf we never see
The tornado never heard
The smoke without odor
Emotions too can be elusive
Even though never void of reality

For some

Feelings
Being of cognitive strength
Overcome such dominance
Evading emotion's fear
Breaking out from shackles and bars
Into rational passion's embrace
Where one's mind
Remembers well the once dank prison of fears
Now but yesterday's smoke and mirrors

 



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Reviewed on June 9, 2012
this is fascinating stuff, the emotions vs. feelings. You have touched on many things in a very well written short poem. Reminds me a bit of reading about narcissist thinking, these concepts of emotion vs. feeling are illuminating. Did you know, Women are more likely to sense a dangerous (volatile) situation than men. Built in defense mechanism if you will.

~ Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 3, 2012
you mine our fears, Odin,
what is often left unsaid
because of our fear of fear;
disturbing challenging truths
the poet is brave enough to confront
kudos!

john

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Odin,
very well penned indead. fear is the little rodent that creeps into our subconscious and devours our reason. As always you have expressed it excellently.

Absit Invidia

Budd

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Great summation in the final stanza, Odin. I especially like those last three lines as well as:

Patience anticipates the hour glass of courage draining

and

Dread enters theses reflective walls
Invisible to light
Void of its own reflection

which articulates well the idea of how warped and scary internalised fear can be when we can't pinpoint its source. In my own head, I tend to distinguish fear as an external force or spiritual element that comes into us, rather than any emotional response which we use to identify and deal with it. Fear is perhaps often tangled up with a sense of dread where it is contingent upon something that has not yet happened. I love the way you invite us always to think hard in response to your own settings out of thoughts and ideas. Kate xx


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