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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Truth's Patience

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

To accept one’s own limitations is not without a cost.

Friday, October 5, 2012

Truth's Patience

Like a seed aspiring the bloom
A cloud anticipating its passion to purge
The slap of a newborn's bottom
Life's first gasp
Introduces realization

Freedom seems apparent
Until strings become attached
Actuality seldom feels grounded
As suspension becomes the norm

Time passes
Expectations wane
Brightly painted smiles
Succumb to harsh realities

So

Many dream

Like Pinocchio's yearnings
Wanting only to be real-alive
Minions cling to time's make-believe-toys
Prolonging the loneliness of growing

Age accelerates
While pretending-to-be
Lags behind
Accepting not
Fate's inherent limitations

Yet

Beyond disillusionment
Resides infinite purpose
At times outside destiny's crosshairs
Lazing on the void
Awaiting fully opened eyes
Whose focus can place
Vertical and horizontal convergence
Upon truth's reward

Here locked tears
Burst like awaiting match heads
Erupting too quickly
For flaming doubt to contain



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Reviewed on October 7, 2012
the imagery stood out, crisp in my mind's eye and what we precieve to be true or not, a dancing marionette we are at times. really liked this.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 6, 2012
Causes a lot of thoughts to cross my mind, but mostly about the toll that hesitation takes on our lives.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 6, 2012
I think dreams often sustain us; if not for one's dreams, life might be truly unbearable.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2012
Oh, three glorious parts, "Prolonging the loneliness of growing" and "Burst like awaiting match heads" and "outside destiny's crosshairs." Those are terrific, but so is this whole writing. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 5, 2012
wonderfully written Odin i liked this a lot
budd


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