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Last Days of Forever

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Watching an old Playhouse 90 production recently reminded me of how perpetual living is, even when it seemingly ceases for some. I can only continue to be grateful for life delivering the growing up period in New York and the contemplation period of climbing in the Alps.

Friday, October 19, 2012

Last Days of Forever

 

With every day

we gather a bit

we plant a bit

 

Time’s waning irrigation

renders dry many tributaries

from high in the ethos-sphere

some of purity’s blossoms

meander down rivulets of calm

while certain regrets bang the drum slowly

droning echoes from canyon to canyon

 

We ask

 

What of the times

when orange blossoms fill the air

when alpine’s flowered reverence

sways its season beside trickling brooks

 

And lest we forget our concrete avenues

where stanchions of glass and steel

hold mysteries aloft from lessons’

East side to West side

 

We always remember those rough and tumble planting seasons

when sunlight seems clouded

and food for flesh

momentarily begets starvation for thought

 

Yet with temperance of satiation

we arrive at harvest time

and suddenly new sprouting appears

the cycling conundrum of time blinks open again

the bard’s handiwork resounds

to be of not to be

 

For such breath-held moments

we remember darkness of sleep

radiance of sunrise

perpetual nature of dreams

 

And suddenly

 

harvest is one with the seed



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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2012
What a magnificent last line! Another one of your frequent phrases containing whole philosophies. "how perpetual life is, even when it seemingly ceases for some." I respect that use of "seemingly." I would guess most readers could identify with the significance and meaning behind "and food for flesh/momentarily begets starvation for thought." And "temperance of satiation" could certainly be a way-of-life aspiration. Good place in this poem. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2012
ah, yes, "to be of not to be" is the rub... isn't it? But ought we not go one step further, or perhaps a stride to the side in another direction: what of "to be of no to be"? That is no small thing. That is no less than no thing. The ultimate negation is nothing short of a negation of existence itself... and why not? Is not "existence" merely a passe verb tense... an action whose use has outlived its time... an ex "is" tense... true, you will say but is that not future perfect? Not if as you say "the harvest is one with the seed"... since sower reaps more than the sum of the yield when the future and past are but gleanings of eternity we see in every grain of sand... every "radiance of sunrise" and in your wonderfully penultimate abstraction about the "perpetual nature of dreams".

... just perfinking about your perceptive/feeling/thought about that "cycling conundrum of time"... and yearning to be out of it... where "to be is no to be"... and what once was is now ... wiser...

Roger


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