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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· A Place...

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· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Shadowlight Awakened

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

This work was prompted by that elusive time between a dream's end and the awakening into reality.

Saturday, October 20, 2012

Shadowlight Awakened

Words without color
Are words drawn from an empty well
From fathoms of dusty knowledge that fade
As time encroaches time

And sounds without song
Are but shards of empty utterances
Where once melody passed from quill to paper, from page to book, from heart to soul
But are now mere ellipses to nowhere

I need not request you touch my heart
To envelope our beings with shadow's light
And create choruses of joy atop the palette of love

You have forged the arc of our journey
Wherein awaits the mystery
That patience bestows on time
That willingness allows for hope
And courage delivers with love

Be my Shadowlight
Dance with me in the whiteness of infinite rainbows
Even as answers linger in shadows

 

With patience granting little

Today I Began A Walk Through Unknowns

Through questions without answers
Through memories not yet born
Through answers to be earned

Tonight I Continued My Walk Through Tomorrow

Where mind and spirit protect each other in anticipation's darkness
Where sleeping rainbows not yet seen prepare their palettes
Where the light quietly waits to dawn the unknown

Tomorrow I Will Take a Walk Through Tonight

To remember the wind that carried the sweet fragrance of your smile
The dance of translucent thought and feeling upon my lips
The shadowlight that protected me from yesterday and remains with me tomorrow



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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2012
Reading this, Shadowlight feels to me like an umbrella with black and white panels, unfolded into your last line: "The shadowlight that protected me from yesterday and remains with me tomorrow" "Where mind and spirit protect each other in anticipation's darkness." That one is magic. The overall effect of all lines together "As time encroaches time" shows a wavering of awakeness's awareness and subconsciousness's elusive flirt. "Wherein awaits the mystery" ~~ "With patience granting little" is a sterling phrase. Diana

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 21, 2012
Quite a captivating piece, especially the ending filled with hope.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 20, 2012
you do paint images with your words like no other
budd

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 20, 2012
A poetic exploration of that time of waking more intuitive than cerebrated from observation and reasoning. I am most familiar with these transitions, and, of the mysterious input harvested from them. May I direct you to one of my own constructs - 'Third Eye Rill' - which explores the same subject from a different angle.
"words without color
are words drawn from an empty well"
Terrific! The art of simplicity in this phrase rich in subtext. Illustrating, IMO, the dessicated jaded hordes of artistic types in need of a living source, and, the element, (in this case 'Living Water') which will reanimate their gift to reveal what mysteries lie hidden as seeds waiting to blossom for the first time, or once again. Enjoyed your colorful thoughts, Odinsan. A quenched thirst day 2 U ...


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