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Reflection's Lament

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Epiphanic searches invite those who allow the darkness to speak to them. The hunt takes on many forms.

Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Reflection's Lament

 

Intensely
The gaze holds

 

Out there
An exchange
Dark eyes look back
Asking us to look in

 

But dark is dark for many
Off-setting for some
An undeniable moment for few

 

Shamans claim
The unknown is but a shadow
Awaiting light's shift
While listeners shout
"The darkness revels in never revealing"

 

So why might both men and boys
Women and girls
All seek unquiet realms
So willingly?

 

Such has come from centuries past
Where genes
Perhaps inheritance unwelcome
May have invaded
Unwelcome estuaries
Colored eyes at random
In caldron swirls
Where species rising
From spawning mud holes
Became today's boundless chain

 

Happenstance became existence
Often creating light eyes
The ones simple to read
Hazel, sky blue, mushroom brown
Ones that give facile reward
So easy to see
So easy to ignore
Comfort zones embraced by masses

 

While Nature's iris-pools of mystery
Some Peacock blue
Beaver brown
Lizard green
Remain in shadowed depth

 

But come the day
The moment one peers
Into a particular still dark pool
Where eyes of earth-brown
Stare back into one's telescopic sight
Adjusted for focus
Clicked in for wind velocity
Then...

 

Many know not why they hesitate
But perhaps Life's ah hah begs reflecting
Consideration for what was
What is to become

 

How brilliant the dark
How revealing the unseeable
As the trigger is pulled
Sending antlers plunging earthward

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 1, 2012
I'm not sure how the hunt equates to the color of one's eyes, but I must be missing something.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 1, 2012
You have conjured another construct richly infused with subtext. Or as you say, Odinkentsan, "the imponderable". This one offers (this reader) more ostensible hints at something deeply unrequited in the writers life. Searching for a lasting corporeal love can be a frustrating journey. Peering into the darkness can be an unsettling experience, too. I am learning, through on-going personal trials, to allow the light to dispel the darkness so that what hides there is more easily seen, and, if necessary, avoided. But then, varied treasures can be found in the dark, too. The balance can be a real challenge.
"Stare back into one's telescopic sight
Adjusted for focus"
Microscopes and telescopes. Both can be used to understand better. It's why I love geodes so much as an assimilable example of humans. Never really know what a person is until you have been given a glimpse inside. Even then we can live an entire lifetime and just end up like your last two lines proffer for cogitation. Enjoyed this mucho. Hoping you're well. Peace ...

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2012
This was a dimensional reading journey. Connectivity abounds in these lines, even as distinctions are present, regarding eyes perceiving lightness or darkness. A big ? for me in this was "...all seek unquiet realms/So willingly?" It made me work at connotating what 'unquiet realms' are sought, eventually affixing "...revels in never revealing" as the answer: we choose impatience and confusion over waiting for clarity. Then the last two stanzas, especially, "...why they hesitate" and "Sending antlers plunging earthward" brought me the scene in the movie "Powder," where the hunter is physically joined to his kill and made to feel the buck's pain and shock, which circles back into the body of this writing, eyes looking into eyes: "Dark eyes look back/Asking us to look in" Very much respect is felt in and for this poem, Odin. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 31, 2012
There's no doubting the attraction that light-giving eyes have as they sparkle and invite us to dance with them. Being the gateway to the soul, their life is exhilarating. But perhaps it's horses for courses and there are those deep, dark plunge pools where we long to immerse ourselves at times - perhaps to find resolution to the questionable parts of ourselves that are still a mystery to us and disturbing; perhaps to assuage our own degrees of black. There is a sense, isnt' there, that behind the "doors" there's a brilliance within that beckons. Your final line is intriguing and makes me think of the Biblical reference to Satan being as an Angel who "fell" from heaven. Always so refreshing to visit your Den, Odin, and engage. Kate xx


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