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...Closer Than They Appear

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

How contingent is the future on our past?

Friday, November 30, 2012

...Closer Than They Appear

Try as we might
that which is behind
never leaves us

Familiar resolves abound

Closure

Moving on

Don't live in the past

Dream of the future


However...


Objects in a mirror
remain closer than they appear

Right view
road kill
past regrets
side roads never taken
all off the right shoulder

Center view
remembered signs
left and right
divided by motion pulling in each direction

Forward
Back

Left view
pursuers coming fast
can't be left behind
as if there's a first place
even as the resisting blast of air
foretells of speeder's folly

Whether of straight line or curved stretches of the journey
questions leave us only for momentary blind spots
our safety net of mirrors always at the ready

Did we actually believe our experience
could be left behind
forgotten
sealed away
distance packaged neatly
replete with c'est la vie ribbons

As mind's eye darts from left to right and center
life's permanent past is dimmable
but only ‘til the high beams of mindfulness demand attention
rendering closed eyes but temporary respite

Might it be

Between then and now
mirrored likenesses of yesterday
are necessary flames of after-burn
enabling the course chosen to proceed forward
whether passing or stopping at new crossroads?

Arrested images of consciousness
here but for the instant need
receding as quickly as they appear
never letting us forget now's need for
the previous
the future

Yes

Try as we might
objects in our mirrors remain

...closer than they appear 


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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
seems like we can touch them ... perhaps we do ...

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
looking back is always a possible view of the future
budd

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory
Reviewed on December 1, 2012
It’s strange when we look back, as to how little we have changed from the family legacy of the past.

Mor.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
A poem that volleys the introductory question with agility in parallel. I like the core of this piece being the very words imprinted on a vehicle side-mirror. Having the drive experience represent travel through life is unique in itself, but the momentum achieved by describing the center view with both coming and going pulling two directions is vast. Attention to the "instant need" . . . lots of reflection, refraction, inflection wrapped in this. Enjoyed this ride. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
I like the references to the automobile in this allegory. I know you're talking about personal experience and I've been doing plenty of that working on my twin brother's and my autobiographies––in his case AUTO-biography. His life is truly in the rear view mirror.

Through the history and discovery channels I am finding that we are rewriting history in a good way when we find out what actually happened as much as thousands of years ago that were only rumors and myths, brought to life by modern science. What a wonderful age we live in where we can verify history.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 30, 2012
The certainty of an uncertain journey. Penned with skill and insight.


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