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· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Promises/Deforestation

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Trusting is difficult. Promises start young, grow, become aberrations, then…

Sunday, December 2, 2012

Promises/Deforestation
by Odin Roark

Propagation
once but little white lies
told as this
found as that

Small child
Smaller adult

Crossroads vanish
becoming eight-lane driverless highways
blindly determinate
like ants with carnage
hastening down darkened tunnels of delusion
obsessing queenly reward

Mutant seedlings develop
over
around
past us

Little by little
survival is vanquished
taken prisoner
stored deep
awaiting kerosene baptism
into "future-preserve" they call it

Flames lick portals
safety promised
futility administered by axe-clashing consumer giants
birthing wasteland

Dead Zones

Mama's promises
once forests of rain
reduced to locust-rage
filling bellies sans hunger
clothing princely born hubris
fueling narcissism turned panic

We clamor into
blogs
tweets
faceless-books
escape
just out of reach

Denying broken promises
fuels voracious carbon foot prints

Yet
we sit center stage
watching
designing
planning
drowning
once glaciers
once rain forests
once flowering deserts

A planet's next century dawns
the next hundred years of shorthand sermons
promising joy in near-death survival
while loin-clothed primitives
once championing Nature
look on
awaiting the next tree to fall 


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2012
Out of this sensitive account, you have fashioned a strong deliverance; and I most admire these two segments: "Small child/Smaller adult" and the six lines beginning with "We clamor into" But the power of the whole is towering. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 3, 2012
Very interesting juxtapose of ideas and images, Odin. Our worlds do indeed start out as pristine and life-giving, brilliant with life... only to be ransacked later by the prior but illegitimate claim of the outworkings of others' non-truths; how the structure of our universes, both internal and external, then collapses. We need a new Eden so that our world doesn't somehow seem to keep lurching from one generation's deadly untruths to the next... Excellent allegory. xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 3, 2012
They are falling into place, one misdeed at a time, fueled by greed. At some point, there's no turning back.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 3, 2012
'hastening down darkened tunnels of delusion'

You've very sadly summed up our modern day world extremely well.

PS: Thanks for your recent comments, and 'Once Upon A Time In The West' is also one of my favorites.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 3, 2012
a bleak statement of the stage of things
budd


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