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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Echo's Gone

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Being a conscionable advocate for save the whales and dolphins, I've watched the series for years: "Whale Wars" on Animal planet. It's off season now (you can watch on YouTube or their site) and the efforts these men and women extend to save such a priceless species is missed. Thus, the ist person whale poem imagined to keep me company.

http://animal.discovery.com/tv-shows/whale-wars

Monday, December 3, 2012

Echo's Gone
by Odin Roark


Sometimes
giving it your best shot
proves not enough

My speed wasn't there
oh I knew how to dodge
but today
being winded
rendered me vulnerable

It was sudden
this tethered impact
didn't think it would hurt
so much

But

Their way
the long way
hurt it did

I knew what was coming
the final shot
the storm cloud across the sun
Time was going to stop
no amount of age
wisdom
history
could stop it

It's warm now
even with the surrounding cold
freezing cold

Warmer still

Blood is everywhere
one last lunge skyward
got to breathe
my last gasp

Quiet now

That bullet did it
can hear my buddies
their agony of loss
like metal on metal
no more voices serene
harmony drifts
as cries of family fade

These last moments strange
harnessed tight
being pulled alongside my captor's hull

Warmth
Vanishing


Cold
Returning


Light
Fading

Behind me
blurred vision reveals
the futile tears of Sea Shepherd

Above me
the anguished fluttering of guardian chopper blades

Ahead of me...

If only...


Dignity ignored
passion of life forgotten
...Not the way to go


My enemies call it
the battle zone

For me
my family
my buddies
it's the feeding zone

Impact came
Violence exploded

Now

Sense of contact ebbing
pain dwindling
the upward drag
the final moments

Tonnage now rising
floating into the ether
from where I came

"Whale Wars"
broadcast continues
consciousness spreading
outrage continues its scream

But

Another echo's gone 


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2012
Hard to read, as in painfully powerfully effectively written. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 4, 2012
We have truly become Earth's most abysmal species. And now, besides killing these whales, someone is murdering dolphins in the Gulf Coast.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 4, 2012
a wonderful rendition from the perspective of the hunted
budd

Reviewed on December 3, 2012
great write, living very close to old whaling ports New Bedford, Nantucket (here in the states) you can get a historical perspective of what still goes on today. add endangered sea turtles, dolphins, seals........just keep going.....seahorses for medicine...coral.......

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on December 3, 2012
this shameful practice 'for research' - what an ugly joke! -
goes on despite the best efforts of the 'Steve Irwin' and other
boats crewed by compassionate women and men; i'm so ashamed of
and angry at this now it would seem exclusively Japanese practice;
well delivered, Odin, your great heart speaks

john


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