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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Wordsmith Warriors

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After 8 years and many iterations, having Echosis now published is both a relief and a bit of discomfort. I think I "finished" it, but lingering in the back of my mind is, "or did I just abandon it?" It is arguable that the question is unanswerable, for as most of us know, the war never ends, even as battles occasionally deliver victory.

Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Wordsmith Warriors
by Odin Roark

Amidst a darkened ether
determined sparks from tired eyes
emit lightning thrusts
collapsing pages into heaps
words forever committed to
knowledge in free-fall

Patience holds fast
against Opinion's quicksand
Belief's trip wires
cautious that Conceit's trap
lurks in the shadows

Lesser conflicts fought with honorable intentions
recede forgotten now
mindful of battles lost and
wars yet to be fought

Ink upon the clearing spreads rapidly
even as tendrils of enemy efforts remain coiled
hidden beneath unctuous praises
ready to ambush
prepared to spring open
today's bombardment
of Distraction's artillery

Sprint we must
across Error's mine-laden fields
seeking not escape amid the commonality
but respite among the enlightened

Flooded by Tenacity's blood
Mind's drenched landscape
bids calm passage beyond
rising through wind swept memories
lifting spirits above seductive doubts

Evacuating Words cry forth tears
hopefully satiating Reader-needs with resolve

And then

The Wordsmith awaits tomorrow's battle to begin

 


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 20, 2012
I certainly understand the struggles. And the desire to be the best you can be at what you do is a real challenge. Sometimes life puts us in circumstances where, if we want to accomplish something, we have to do it ourselves, otherwise, the chances are, it won't get done. I am well acquainted with this conflict.

"Errors mine-laden fields"? haha ... Don't fret too much. Of course it depends on why one writes, but I don't think most readers would ever know, or care. There are errors in everything man-made I'm convinced. For example ... I found 3 grammatical errors in the 'DaVinci Code' when I read it. And that book was purportedly edited numerous times by the cream of the crop. As a matter of fact [every] book I've ever read I've found errors in, from Jules Verne to C.S. Lewis to the infamous New York Times best sellers like James Patterson.

The compulsion/obsession to redo, reiterate, reconstruct, or refashion, over and over and over and over to satisfy some personal intellectual itch, dillutes the purity of original intent I'm convinced. You can take a thing beautifully birthed from the heart, in clarity and purity, and muck it up with the mind in an effort to 'perfect' it. A bit like chasing after the wind to me. But it won't keep people from trying. Honest work here, Kent, written with an open heart. Holiday blessings ...

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 19, 2012
You are the poet laureate of our times. C'est magnifique!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 19, 2012
I really like this one my friend..you did not abandon it
budd


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