Wordsmith Warriors
by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com
After 8 years and many iterations, having Echosis now published is both a relief and a bit of discomfort. I think I "finished" it, but lingering in the back of my mind is, "or did I just abandon it?" It is arguable that the question is unanswerable, for as most of us know, the war never ends, even as battles occasionally deliver victory.
Wednesday, December 19, 2012
Wordsmith Warriors
by Odin Roark
Amidst a darkened ether
determined sparks from tired eyes
emit lightning thrusts
collapsing pages into heaps
words forever committed to
knowledge in free-fall
Patience holds fast
against Opinion's quicksand
Belief's trip wires
cautious that Conceit's trap
lurks in the shadows
Lesser conflicts fought with honorable intentions
recede forgotten now
mindful of battles lost and
wars yet to be fought
Ink upon the clearing spreads rapidly
even as tendrils of enemy efforts remain coiled
hidden beneath unctuous praises
ready to ambush
prepared to spring open
today's bombardment
of Distraction's artillery
Sprint we must
across Error's mine-laden fields
seeking not escape amid the commonality
but respite among the enlightened
Flooded by Tenacity's blood
Mind's drenched landscape
bids calm passage beyond
rising through wind swept memories
lifting spirits above seductive doubts
Evacuating Words cry forth tears
hopefully satiating Reader-needs with resolve
And then
The Wordsmith awaits tomorrow's battle to begin
"Errors mine-laden fields"? haha ... Don't fret too much. Of course it depends on why one writes, but I don't think most readers would ever know, or care. There are errors in everything man-made I'm convinced. For example ... I found 3 grammatical errors in the 'DaVinci Code' when I read it. And that book was purportedly edited numerous times by the cream of the crop. As a matter of fact [every] book I've ever read I've found errors in, from Jules Verne to C.S. Lewis to the infamous New York Times best sellers like James Patterson.
The compulsion/obsession to redo, reiterate, reconstruct, or refashion, over and over and over and over to satisfy some personal intellectual itch, dillutes the purity of original intent I'm convinced. You can take a thing beautifully birthed from the heart, in clarity and purity, and muck it up with the mind in an effort to 'perfect' it. A bit like chasing after the wind to me. But it won't keep people from trying. Honest work here, Kent, written with an open heart. Holiday blessings ...
budd