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Relief Map Bodies

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Cosmetic alterations of seemingly all body parts, including the most private of privates, suggests the proverbial Fountain of Youth is becoming more than just a global obsession. It’s apt to become an unforgiving phenomena of delusion.

Friday, December 21, 2012

Relief Map Bodies
by Odin Roark

...too few seek truth
up close without remorse
unwilling to forfeit
the smooth
the cool
youth's interminable clinging
to an undivided cell's inexperience

Greeting Age's mentor of sculpted guise
shows Time's bestowed gifts
Risk
wrapped in chance rewards
Belief
tied with razor wire bows
Wisdom
delivered sometimes late

How perfect

these lessons
taught on mindscape's rutted roads
rock strewn paths
precipitous switchbacks
leading to peaks
many times
just out of reach

Along the way

tributaries determine to carry
residual afloat down and across
seeking further landscapes
where flowered pigment
rides astride nighttime predators
softening dreams of challenge
coloring awakening with worth

How few embrace

Life's weathered landscapes
planted
tilled
harvested
by one's own insistent nature

How vast the number

pursuing elaborate escape plans
forever following the jester's
mirage of youth
mystically obviating the flat
the barren
the deserted plain
asking absolution for one's inner mirror
reflections borne of shattered innocence
we willingly give up
while grappling
Acceptance
Trust
Respect
Truth

But Time

remains generous
for those willing to refute the reaper's insistence
accepting instead one's dimensionally carved character
where aging landmarks belie denial
celebrate sculpted bas-relief
welcome trophies of
wrinkled ribbons
engraved plaques
nature's forged medals
awaiting final polish
for the display
named
death

How soothing

how honorable
such deliverance must be
to stand naked
before honest reflections
embracing the all
the once eruptive force of birth
now the image addressing
fogged windows of fate

Such might be

Gravity's final hurrah
Tethered essence set aloft
Perpetuation's opening act
Infinity's endless theatre 


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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on December 22, 2012
Not me. I'm a mere 75. Just took my Celebrex. Good for 12 more hours. Maybe less.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 21, 2012
thank you for this one my friend
budd

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 21, 2012
Haha ... a great insight, poet. There is subtext in this that I will have to excogitate. A big business, too, this restructuring of facial flesh and body parts. Several in my circles have sadly relinquished their genuineness to these nip and tuck procedures. Alas! This artificial reversal of gravity too often creates caricatures of what once had a distinctive beauty and appeared normal. Arrogance is the motivator, I'm convinced, as it all creates and propagates the "endless theatre" of humanities fickle fear of - not getting old but - looking old.


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