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Paralysis Hovering

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As the first of multiple economic crises needing attention struggled through a myriad of obstacles, one is left wondering if the hand-ringing-decision-making process that limped battle-scared into the New Year can fess up to what is expected for the next twelve months. Beyond politics, one can also examine one's own everyday position regarding integrity as a most precious value.

Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Paralysis Hovering
by Odin Roark

How demanding this passenger
Sitting beside us
Train
Plane
Bus stop
Mountain Trail
Makes no difference
To this wanderer
Caring not for our weakness

Preying by habit
Whether by walk
Run
Sleep
Or encounter

Paralysis seeks vacant seats
Opting for willing company
Continuing the silence
Its volcanic heat prepares
Knowing aloneness invites
Company often without discretion

Even as we struggle to remain aware
Bondage opts to trick us
Passing on as it does
Pages of distractions
Volumes of escapism

Yet

Our inner sanctum
Asks we generate shackle-free expression
To fill blank pages
Embracing the mind’s devotion
As it battles to stay ever ready

Nature
Flexing muscle
Still of syllabic reason
Pumping blood
Rich with immunity-rich life
Provides our human form
With peerless sentient infrastructure

Lest we forget

The marriage of greatest importance
That commitment between mind and heart
That relationship inoculated against divorce
The undeniable power of volitional passion
Struggling through molten eruptions
Willing to bear scars and open wounds
Is the honor of survival

To succumb
Is to shake hands with paralysis
This most insipid and disguised
Of all dysfunctions

For even as one may desire pleasure
Shirking responsibility of passion’s quest
Invites the all too willing gatekeeper
Lurking in the shadows
Keys clanging like girders in a hurricane
Patiently waiting
Ready to bestow permanent impotence
For sharpening its most cherished weapon
Cowardice

  


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Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on January 6, 2013
Your metaphor is powerful and extremely detailed. The whole poem, with its progressive construction, draws me in. At the core of your poem, I find the words/concepts of "paralysis" and "cowardice", clearly connected to each other. "The commitment between mind and heart" is something I think about daily and it's one of the many important connections that are (not so slowly) disappearing throughout the world.

Axilea

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 5, 2013
As I see it, the surface text, (more externalized) and the subtext, (more internalized) are a potent conflux that cover a wide gamut. Well done! Regarding a construal of subtext ... "Willing to bear scars and open wounds"... haha, whether we want to or not. It happens, too often, when respectable expectations are not met as we open up and share our constructs and books in public forums where gossip, coteries, phoniness, diseased minds, druggies, potheads, drunks, and jealousy diminishes verve and the desire to interact. Given this, wounds will be inflicted and we will bear the eventual scars of our efforts. Thankfully there are some who walk differently. One step at a time, stopping often to breath and rejuvenate. Source, IMO, is the most important component in this struggle. Continued inspiration and focus, poet ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 5, 2013
do we survive by meaningful integrity or by scheming?
what is our true worth if there ever was such a thing
or if there is such a thing left?
the white flag was once despised, now one knows what it means, only red flags of false threats meant to keep us in check

enough rambling; this is powerful writing, Odin, powerful

john

Reviewed on January 4, 2013
those keys are clanging to irreversable change with it's greatest harm to another generation. doesn't matter what any decisions have been recently , most of the damage is done.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 2, 2013
i really enjoyed this my friend
budd

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 2, 2013
I am in no position to make political comment here, Odin, but the poetry is powerful in its ability to cause the reader to participate and feel his/her own paralysis in the painful situation and scenario you paint. It strikes me that "needs must" is a potent social leveller and there can surely be no greater expediency than the needs-must of fiscal survival... at least until the greater needs of human and environmental survival get a look in! Wealth and poverty are isolating ivory towers whose inhabitants can never meet - except through being thrust into the tin can of a never-ending train journey where, cheek-by-jowel, exposure to each's "otherness" might forge some common ground... especially if, otherwise, the train will fatally derail. Forgive me if I'm totally off-beam here, but it's just the way my mind is running, given the stimulus of your always-provoking work. May 2013 bring you much inspiration and fruitfulness in all things. Kate xx

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on January 2, 2013
Wow. This is monumental. Stanza three feels like the I-Beam, holding up the cathedral. Reading these lines brings out strong weakness handling weak strongness. Attributing menace to paralysis is aptly applied, especially "Paralysis seeks vacant seats." I appreciated the contrast I felt when reading this, the "keep moving to keep moving" idea right next to the contradiction of 'let it be,' or 'decision by means of not deciding.' Terrific - mind and heart commitment being "...inoculated against divorce." ~~ Diana


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