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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· A Place...

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· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Tomorrow's Canvases Unknown

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Try as we might to hold firm, change is unstoppable.

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Tomorrow's Canvases Unknown
by Odin Roark

Life's mind colors
Like the number paintings stored in attic webs
Become dust covered pleasures of memories past
When Ferris wheels rotated dreams
Calliope horses pole-galloped gently
Cotton candy played catch-me-if-you-can

How easy awareness painted the future
Laid down the colors most apparent
Reds of sunset passions
Blues of ebb and tide
Yellows of cornfield mazes
Green making all the landings plush as summer lawn

Primary hues
Like even-numbered shapes
Fall short the color containment
Boundaries bleed
Chance pushes risk
Mustards find full-up dance cards
Purples hemorrhage bruises once flawless cover
Gray becomes reality's true color
No blacks
No whites

Simple brush strokes
Evolve to palette knife strata
Thickness of time layers over
Numbered boundaries
Melt away
Framed borders cease to be

How wonderful
This wanderlust
Wisdom's gift-wrapped beginning
Ever grateful the loft-stored memories
Thankful the web's defending watch
Such protects time-made colors
Now with no names
No identity

Initiation's flirtatious way
Patiently mixing
Aroused shades
Tints
Dyes to be cast

Tomorrow's Canvases Unknown 


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Reviewed on January 17, 2013
this sounds great out loud btw. just excellent.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2013
It took me four read-throughs to absorb the nuances of this poem. How not surprising of your work, Odin. It cannot be tasted in one bite, and that makes it ever more enticing. At first I was ready to say the title didn't fit. Oh how premature that would have been. I may have said this before, but often your pieces are artichoke-like, many layers to the heart, the best part. I ruminated over "Mustards find full-up dance cards." So perfectly perfect when I understood what that meant -- stir together everything, wonderful! Brush strokes to palette knife....fabulous. You write with the vision of a housefly (that's a complement) only each hexagon has a different view. What a deeply unique ability. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Carolyn Dye
Reviewed on January 16, 2013
Qdin, you write such beautiful and heartfelt poems, love reading your work. please keep blessing us with your gift.
carolyn

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on January 16, 2013
Love the descriptions and feeling of gratitude.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 16, 2013
yes such hues to find as the time comes
budd


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