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The Place

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

On this Inauguration Day.

Monday, January 21, 2013

The Place
by Odin Roark

Where is this place
some say is all you are
all you can be
where the heart flows of blood
both yours and mine
where children and the aged seem one

Why is this place
with us always
yet elusively
unseen
unheard
untouched
pending our ready
enduring our will

How is this place
to show itself
when sadness clouds vision
joy seems unearned
glory of the now drifts out of reach

When will this place
reveal
become
be known
as nature wishes

There is a place
most long to see
that realm where love
asks not of another
but lives only to be  


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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 22, 2013
this is a beautifully written poem, Odin,
fluent, almost psalmic, controlled and poignant

for me, one your best

john

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 22, 2013
The fool asks "where is love?" But this poet replies "Love exists not for those who seek it, but for those who are receptive to it." The difference is found in a lifetime of experience.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 21, 2013
Like everything, Odin, unless "This Place" is within - or at least starts out being so - it's unlikely we will find it anywhere else as it depends on what we are seeking and what we perceive it to be. We search endlessly for it and it largely eludes us. In order to find it, perhaps we need to ask ourselves "And what can we bring?". Your pivotal third stanza says it all - and precisely. Neat work to cut to the chase of any presidential puff. xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 21, 2013
I think I would call that place, “Wishful Thinking.”

Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 21, 2013
Hope time solves this enigma

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 21, 2013
Odin, a wonderful rendering of that which, more times than not, stands in front of us, while we search the world.
Cheers,
Dan


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