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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Unfinished Nightmare

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Try as we might, as writers we can never fully understand another's pain. All we can do is imagine.

Friday, January 25, 2013

Unfinished Nightmare
by Odin Roark

Mouth agape
trash can lid arches limply
its hinged spine
like that of partial paragraphs
clinging
broken
yet refusing to let go

How gauze-like
the yellowed reflection
staring back from shattered temper-enhanced mirror
clinging also
defying decayed adhesive
refusing like me to accept
the dry erosion of once anchored purpose

I gaze
deep into the opened sanctuary
a place where discarded failure finds solace
glaring back at me
it continues its vigil
reminding the writer has produced but throwaway

Open-mouthed gluttony
grins patiently
crumpled pages like meatless bones
fantasy feast
mere table scraps
drop willingly to appease
if not satiate

Shrill words retch forth
pleading to be more than just letters in free fall
find air void of oxygen
fall leaden
but empty
condors and sparrows without wings

Unfinished manuscripts cry to live
to know
to hear
created epiphanies
read and embraced

The involuntary voice shouting back at my muse
rides triumphantly atop the wrinkled failure of drunken words
falls seductively past the gaping mouth
sliding between the sheets of other near misses
continuing the downward vortex
sending shivers of nourishment to
one’s abyss of failure
where no one
patiently waits
abides
understands
smiles 


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Reviewed on January 27, 2013
only those with true empathy can begin to imagine, last stanza could stand on it's own. clever way to catch that feeling.~ Morgan

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 25, 2013
thsoe before me have expressed very well the talent you always display for us here
budd

Reviewed on January 25, 2013
You reveal the soul of a true poet.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 25, 2013
Few writers can paint a portrait in words with half the impact of Odin Roark. He even turns scrap heaps into master pieces.


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